Poem -
Forever In Constellation
Right as rain tonight
Tonight the eyes go searching skies
Where stars acompany moon
In pillow cloudless night,
Damn right a good night
For love, burning high as heavens
Wishes answered from millions of miles
Go riding shooting stars
Relaying those ancient lights
That guide old ocean travelers,
Fix all the focus on perceptive sense
Out there we belong
Infinite beauty, eternal hearts
Scattered in lover's locality
Worldly recognized
By the true passionate paramours,
With you,
On such a perfect night
Forever in Constellation.
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amazing imagery and tone, Devon....you really have a great feel for poetic construction and subject matter...transporting the reader...nothing captivates like the starry night, it fills the mind with fascination, and you captured the magic and wonder of it all, added a 'romantic' element as well, I like it a lot, really good reading....have a great night, pal
Christopher what's up man, thanks a bunch glad to see you stop by my pages, and this is a great comment I thought if love eternal what better way to show it off forever in Constellation. Hope all is well.
Hey Devon, Beautiful Write, I enjoyed each lines. Â Great job.Cheers.
Cleo your support is so appreciative of late you are doing a fantastic job as AOM, pleased you enjoyed.
A sparkling write !!!
Love it !
Best wishes ! :)
Whats more beautiful then cementing you and your love into the universe for every stargazer or loving couple to see. Thanks Richard
Thank you !
Hey Devon I looked up into the stars many a night after my separation and wondered if I was ever going to find a love again. My life has gone 180 degrees from where it was a year ago . Your poem reminds me of love and it is always there if you look in the right place . Cheers rockÂ
I can't imagine the pain you went through especially when kids are involved because it is tough on them too. So happy you were able to flip things around and find the path for you under those bright stars where lovers live forever . Thanks man.
Our minds are earthly, but a loving heart wonders among the mysteries of the stars.
And love twinkles brightly in eternities universe. Thanks Kimmy pretty cool man.
Hello Devon...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrowsong thanks, your hugs are so appreciated on this cold snowy day. Hope all is well with you.