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Awaited Love

Awaited Love

Β It’s a lottery, this love game, just a lottery.
I have seen your face in my dreams for so many years.
A perfect oval frame for that smile.
That smile, that captivates and captures.
The memory of it lingered with me all day,
the innocence and trust.
Too fragile to chance breaking.. ever
I can’t remember a time when I have felt such joy
just holding you…gently
within arms that will never betray you.
Planning a future, full of wonders and Β β€˜joie de vivre’
With me at the helm to steer a cautious path
through any troubled seas.
Will you trust me? Will you love me?
This love is a forever love,
for better for worse,
richer or poorer
sickness and health.
I saw that smile for the first time today..
And I Β am smitten,
I am a grandfather!

Β 

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lodigiana

Lovely write StevieC!! with a nice twist at the end xx

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Love it too great write my brother

DO me a favor, I rated you, give a couple of minutes of your time to rate and leave a comment on a recently submitted poem.Β  Inspiration is addicting

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StevieC

Thanks very much Greg! You are right though, I should comment more but dont always know the right things to say..but I guess just keep it simple and honest..Thanks again

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StevieC

Thanks Kieran! not really a prolific writer so I'm a bit 'hit n' miss being on the site but felt I needed to write this one in celebration!! Much appreciated comments

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Tony Taylor

Amen!!.....'smitten'!!......"I am a grandfather!"........this is beautifully conveyed......my day is coming soon......you have written something so poetically compelling here that it will remain with me, powerfully, in the days ahead!!......PINNED this one STEVIE!!.......well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ???✴?✴❀

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Tony Taylor

Amen!!.....'smitten'!!......"I am a grandfather!"........this is beautifully conveyed......my day is coming soon......you have written something so poetically compelling here that it will remain with me, powerfully, in the days ahead!!......PINNED this one STEVIE!!.......well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ???✴?✴❀

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StevieC

hey Tony congratulationsΒ  my man!Β  for the forthcoming events that will enrich your life beyond your wildest dreams- great days a'coming for you that will keep a smile permanently on your face! Thanks so much for your comments - really appreciate them!Β 

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