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Forgotten Realm

Forgotten Realm

The sun fell over the shore
The moon claimed her silver throne
The stars shined upon the hill
As I dived into the sea.

Dreaming eyes stare at me
Follow me deep into the stream
Losing faith I felt so weak
The coldness came as I dived still in.

The night`s rage became my fear
Her deuce chasing me with gear
The darkness kept him on my road
Shores of flames burning my hope.

Oh how I wish to be home
The place I once called my lore
Golden wheat growing near
With you there on our realm.

Sorrow has come as I saw you
Down there dived by the same stream
I sailed to you but with no gain
You were far, the end was near.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

aredhel Telrúnya,

A wonderful write, melancholy diluted with romantic instincts, I wish to pick my most liked lines from your verse, My applause to your golden pen.

Sorrow has come as I saw you ( Sorrowfulness  is the emotion here, great)
Down there dived by the same stream ( Very elegant portrait)
I sailed to you but with no gain ( Sadness within a dormant smile)
You were far, the end was near. ( Very meaningful )

Regards, thanks and Love to your poem

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Xiǎo Jiàn

thank you so much, it helps a lot to know that u enjoyed it

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

aredhel Telrúnya,

My applause and congrats on your winning nomination

Regards

WILLIAMSJI

 

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Xiǎo Jiàn

oh my God didn't realized that I was nominated

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Xiǎo Jiàn

thank u please vote if u liked it, thank u

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