Poem -
Formidable
Like 4 Pin it 1Great white looms, murk n brew,
Spume crimson, roar of thunder,Β
Splintered mast, flag askew,
Tumult cries, aplomb asunder.Boatswain a cadaver in ebbing waves,
Seamen cower amidst a scourge,
Battered vessel tests the brave,
Alpha scurries through flurries in purge.Trawler rocked, capsized in breadth,
silhouette claims names of men,
Succumbed to angst, courage bereft,
Into the dark descends again.
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Comments
WOW!! Sir BROMLEY!!.....the images that come so powerfully at the reader......in a staccato driven, rhythmically delivered, sense of darkness and danger, makes for a VERY powerful glimpse into the underworld of the ocean and the predators that lurk below!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....;this is a STELLAR piece of poetic profundity dear poet brother!!.....Enjoyed this VERY much SIMON!!....VERY well penned my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ :Β )
Tony thank you! I'm not quite there yet but hopefully I'll find my rhythm again soon.Β Your continued support is very much appreciated my friend.Β
Jaws!!Β A huge rogue shark. You have told a brilliant short story here in a very poetical way. I agree with Tony, the images you create here are awesome!Β The images create a vivid scene in the readers mind. Pictures, sounds, smells.Β Well done, Simon, very well done! I do love to read what you write, you never disappoint your reader.Β Great to see you back here! Havexa fab day xx