FREEDOM ACROSS THE TRACKS

She is bored of being at homeÂ
Her punishment for those late night roamsÂ
She lives in an affluent neighborhoodÂ
From the outside everything looks good
She's only thirteen years old
But you could not tell by the way she looksÂ
Piercings and tattoos covers her bodyÂ
Like a black satin dress engraved with lace
Her choice of lipstick is ruby redÂ
Complimenting the perfect makeup on her faceÂ
She is chauffeured to the finest places in townÂ
Like a queen she is protectedÂ
By her assigned security to her beck and callÂ
Sloane is her name which means "warrior" or "fighter"
And nothing gets in her wayÂ
Determination is the strength of her characterÂ
But she loves going to the poor side of townÂ
It is there she can let her hair down
The children living there are very coolÂ
A stark contrast between her affluent neighborhoodÂ
Where she lives
And those high society children at her schoolÂ
Tonight is the night she will make her moveÂ
Through the window and down the stoopÂ
Her real family is on the poor side of townÂ
A place where she can be herself "Sloane"
And not that rich little girl from the east side of town.
Wilford Barker.
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This was a great read, what a story. I was also thinking it was leading somewhere really dark to start with. What with her age and tattoos. How our brains quickly need to make sense of something and often get it wrong. I loved this. The feeling of confinement. The need to feel free. How being wealthy can have consequences, and it’s the simplest things in life that can bring us true happinessÂ
great journey, thank you Wilford ✨👏🌻
Good morning Gwendoline..
thanks for your kind words.Â
Happy that you like it.
Sir BARKER!!.....you know what I found so compelling about this?......the subtle poetic narrative that seeps into the minds eye of the reader without actually evoking all the stories and films that have to do with people "From the wrong side of the tracks".......you would think that would be a problem......but because your poetic rhythm sets it up as something so naively true......the reader gets a fresh take on a VERY old story!!......your pen shines here my friend!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!....your writing continues to improve dear poet brother!!......A pleasure!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Now I can breathe.... Woo sa!! lol.
Thanks my friend.. your cup will forever overflowÂ
because of your kindness to us all. The official Ambassador of Cosmofunnel.