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FREEDOM ACROSS THE TRACKS

FREEDOM ACROSS THE TRACKS

She is bored of being at home 
Her punishment for those late night roams 
She lives in an affluent neighborhood 
From the outside everything looks good

She's only thirteen years old
But you could not tell by the way she looks 
Piercings and tattoos covers her body 
Like a black satin dress engraved with lace
Her choice of lipstick is ruby red 
Complimenting the perfect makeup on her face 

She is chauffeured to the finest places in town 
Like a queen she is protected 
By her assigned security to her beck and call 

Sloane is her name which means "warrior" or "fighter"
And nothing gets in her way 
Determination is the strength of her character 

But she loves going to the poor side of town 
It is there she can let her hair down
The children living there are very cool 
A stark contrast between her affluent neighborhood 
Where she lives
And those high society children at her school 

Tonight is the night she will make her move 
Through the window and down the stoop 
Her real family is on the poor side of town 
A place where she can be herself "Sloane"
And not that rich little girl from the east side of town.

Wilford Barker.

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Gwendoline

This was a great read, what a story. I was also thinking it was leading somewhere really dark to start with. What with her age and tattoos. How our brains quickly need to make sense of something and often get it wrong. I loved this. The feeling of confinement. The need to feel free. How being wealthy can have consequences, and it’s the simplest things in life that can bring us true happiness 

great journey, thank you Wilford ✨👏🌻

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Wilford Barker

Good morning Gwendoline..
thanks for your kind words. 
Happy that you like it.

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Tony Taylor

Sir BARKER!!.....you know what I found so compelling about this?......the subtle poetic narrative that seeps into the minds eye of the reader without actually evoking all the stories and films that have to do with people "From the wrong side of the tracks".......you would think that would be a problem......but because your poetic rhythm sets it up as something so naively true......the reader gets a fresh take on a VERY old story!!......your pen shines here my friend!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!....your writing continues to improve dear poet brother!!......A pleasure!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Wilford Barker

Now I can breathe.... Woo sa!! lol.
Thanks my friend.. your cup will forever overflow 
because of your kindness to us all. The official Ambassador of Cosmofunnel.

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