Poem -
Freedom Trail
I wanna exist in a world
where anything goes
An open zone
where we are
free to say
whatever we please
Totally free
from the tyranny
of moral hypocrisy
Liberated
from the shackles
of consequence
A non judgemental
mutually respectful
unimpeded society
Imagine the open
communications exchange
if we did not take
every perceived slight
so personally?
If complete
and unrestrained honesty
was the rule
rather than exception?
These pliable rules
of social anarchy
we need only embrace
then we could all
conceivably
communicate
unrestrained
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WOW!!..........this is so beautifully delivered.............as a piece of penetrating insightfulness..........I'd like to be the first to congratulate you..............everything about this write is poetic..........smokin' grooves friend!!.............T xx
Thanks T.. As always your generosity truly humbles me
awesome sauce!!! my brain is barely functioning due to a kick ass migraine and i wasnt planning on commenting or anthing today .. but i cant resist with thiss one!! superb delivery n all that jazz! i hear where u r commin from brother!! i dig it!
omg Julien!!! I am overwhelmed by your kindness... I hope you are feeling better ;)
Good write Steve very nicely done all stars.
Thanks Cherie.. you captured the spirit of my poem perfectly... I want to color in all the white lies white as to make them invisible and irrelevant
Thanks Devon Tis always good to vent things out
What better way then through poetry, i couldn't agree more Steve it really helps.
With you too Steve...
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