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Frost

Frost

Silent night midst lambent kiss,
Ethereal gaze of moon serene,
Unveils beauteous ice caress,
Dressed by hand of frost pristine.

Immutable charm of nature pours,
Glistening across vast rooftops,
Laid in crown upon forest floors,
Crystal lakes and sapling tops.

Bitter chill fills the air,
Icy blast, a dreary hand,
Casts a spell, a chill in old,
Though enchanted layer upon the land.

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Tony Taylor

Hello Sir SIMON!!.... you have created a lovely, poetic, layer upon the land..... with words that paint a truth and a crust of poetic topping upon the landscape of the here and now......I truly enjoyed these lines my Brava!!!......It's different...... it's unique....... it's poetic bro!! ~

                            ~ "Ethereal gaze of moon serene
                                Unveils beauteous ice caress
                                Dressed by hand of frost pristine..."

I really like this style you're attempting here....... it has tons of room brother!!.........ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet brother!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo.  : )
                                

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Simon Bromley

Thank you my friend, trying to get back into the swing of things after short absence.  Appreciate your support as always.

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Cherie Leigh

Hi Simon..What a beautiful frosty scene of winter..with very original phrasing to give awesome imagery,  I love nature and to feel it through your words...Great work! xo ;) 

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Simon Bromley

Thank you, as always your comments give me hope and confidence.

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Jill Tait

Brrrrr made me chilly but in a beautiful way xx

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charlotte

Lovely ! You make frost sound so beautiful , and rightly so ... Even aspects of the cold can appear beautiful . Lovely piece of writing 

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Charlotte trying to find my mojo again lol glad you enjoyed it.

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Marion Price

Very beautiful Simon...takes me right into the heart of winter 🌹

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Simon Bromley

Aww thank you Marion your support means everything 

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