Poem -
Frost
Silent night midst lambent kiss,
Ethereal gaze of moon serene,
Unveils beauteous ice caress,
Dressed by hand of frost pristine.
Immutable charm of nature pours,
Glistening across vast rooftops,
Laid in crown upon forest floors,
Crystal lakes and sapling tops.
Bitter chill fills the air,
Icy blast, a dreary hand,
Casts a spell, a chill in old,
Though enchanted layer upon the land.
Comments
Hello Sir SIMON!!.... you have created a lovely, poetic, layer upon the land..... with words that paint a truth and a crust of poetic topping upon the landscape of the here and now......I truly enjoyed these lines my Brava!!!......It's different...... it's unique....... it's poetic bro!! ~
                           ~ "Ethereal gaze of moon serene
                               Unveils beauteous ice caress
                                Dressed by hand of frost pristine..."
I really like this style you're attempting here....... it has tons of room brother!!.........ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet brother!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo. : )
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Thank you my friend, trying to get back into the swing of things after short absence. Appreciate your support as always.
Hi Simon..What a beautiful frosty scene of winter..with very original phrasing to give awesome imagery, I love nature and to feel it through your words...Great work! xo ;)Â
Thank you, as always your comments give me hope and confidence.
Brrrrr made me chilly but in a beautiful way xx
Thank you Jill it means alot
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Lovely ! You make frost sound so beautiful , and rightly so ... Even aspects of the cold can appear beautiful . Lovely piece of writingÂ
Thank you Charlotte trying to find my mojo again lol glad you enjoyed it.
Very beautiful Simon...takes me right into the heart of winter 🌹
Aww thank you Marion your support means everythingÂ