Love At Full Strength
You may have backed down from our love
But I don't back down
I stand tall and face it all with a smile, that same smile that fuels the flame, that ignites the passion, and just the same would bring me miles to see you smile
Because on nights when I bleed
you’re the only thing I need to keep me breathing, to keep me living and still believing, and while you may quit, me, I'm still reaching, ever higher, just a little higher, despite all the scars on my arms from the fire, I'd reach into hell to pull you right out, don't try to convince me what love is about
We built this from the ground ascending, there's no pretending, you threw out the blueprints that I'm still defending
With every fiber of my being
I'll protect what we've made
You picked the wrong man
To just walk away
From a love at full strength
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Holy Crap ONLOOKER!!...... this is an excellent piece!!.....A love poem ~ indeed!!!...... but to my mind...... this is a LOVE SONG!!...... the way you rhyme in the middle AND at the end of lines throughout is magical bro!!..... and as songwriter.....I can tell you without a doubt...... this is NOT just any other Love song....... but a haunting Lœve song..... that is to say...,. the kind of song that sticks with the listener!!...... an amazingly lyrical piece my friend!!...... capturing the essence of how Love affects the human soul..... and delivered in the spirit of the most powerful ballads of all time......" I'd reach into hell to pull you right out.."....... kick ass stuff my friend!!......PINNED!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳♥
Hey brother T!! You know what? You've told me you were a songwriter before, I'd love to hear your work! You give me the highest of compliments with to say it was "magical" haha I'LL TAKE IT! I'm excited to learn I'm making some progress as a writer. The inspiration for this piece was very real and the emotion put into the line you quoted was also very real so I'm glad you caught that. I'm glad you stopped by to read, much love! ??
Onlooker*
Fantastic, what raw emotion! 5/5*
-Ano-
Thank you for a great compliment!
CO
This, my friend is an amazing piece. Not just a well crafted piece of art, but a masterpiece that comes from the heart! I AM a woman who has always backed away, and all I can say is; I've never known a man to say;
"You picked the wrong man
to just walk away"
It moved me with emotion. Your words revealed the heart and character of who you are! Your a one in a million. This made the fearful child within me, say; HE'S A KEEPER!