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gardens of starlight

gardens of starlight

grant me the peace of a delicate
flower
the beauty of being
if just but for one hour

let my heart return
to the place that it seeks
let god close his eyesย 
and in mercy bequeath

a dream in the gardens of starlight
with you
just one more last hug
just to help me get through

let time not exist
for some moments or two
grant me the wish
where not one thing is true

except this,

M ~
artwork my own

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Marion

Thank you so much John... greatly appreciated my friend x

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Rory McGinlay

I adore a visual. And you know me, M. I'm all about abstract. So you know I'm not shiting in your pocketย 

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Marion

Fuck I hope not ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜† thankyou Rory...
I think my wall is wonky!! ๐Ÿ˜† x

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Rory McGinlay

My wall is wonky. Sometimes it still lets people in

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Marion

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Jac Tales

Love is a flower that still needs to be watered. Lovely Poem & Picture.ย  ย  ย 

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Neville

The title itself is stand alone blindingly beautiful .. what followed is near flawless .. Regards to both your brush and your pen .. Neville x

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Marion

Thanks Nev, your kind words are greatly appreciated X

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Neville

My words were meant to accurately reflect my initial impression and with luck, be sustained throughout each of my subsequent visits .. and which I am pleased to report would seem to be the case thus far ..
AGT's ..ย Neville x

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Shirley Harrison

This deserves so much more than any stars anyone can give, beautiful rhyme beautiful sentiments and stunning visuals that took me back to have those last hugs ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿค—ย 

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Marion

So kind thanks love X

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Nine Eleven

That final hug before we set off on the journey of growth, I wish we could take it with us, and for some, they wish it true.ย 

Your words resonate with me Marion and your art work is astonishing, thank you for sharing it. X

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Marion

How kind you are... greatly appreciated NE... thankyou x

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Bernadete van d...

At the moment I cannot find words to say how much I like this poem. Maybe tomorrow.ย 
Is this art work yours? What a talented lady you are, Marion. ย 

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Marion

Ah.. you have said more than enough and it's so greatly appreciated X

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Larry Ran

Hi Marion,

Your lovely and deep-reaching work inspires this haiku.

I am a flower
For but one fleeting moment
My sadness subsides

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Marion

Thankyou so much Larry... hugs x

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Being Me

Oh what beauty and clarity in these words! The poem is awesomely good so a universe of stars for you. Painting is absolutely fabulous. No, seriously, it is .... they both are. Hugs xx

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Marion

Thanks so much love.. you are so appreciated ๐Ÿ’•

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