Poem -
Gentle Beings
Dedicated to Cherie Leigh! She will know why ?
Gentle unearthly beings
These creatures move
With magical disposition
Their colours shine
Like shimmering glitter
Their glorious mane
Wreaks of immense vibrant colour
Sparkling blues
Pinks and yellows
Dance against the glistening breeze
Their spiral horns
Providing its divine strength
Pure rarity
Living in a sublime fantasy
Of which we cannot find
They are not of this world
Yet our worlds are intertwined
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Comments
what wonderful poem
and nice tribute to
Cherie who is wonderful
lady
Thank you Greg for the support and continuing to read my work.
Yes she is a lovely person.
Px?
Nice P - but what of yours is not?!
Thank you kindly Terry! I will take that as a huge compliment. Most appreciative that you take the time to read my writes.
Px ?
Such a truly beautiful write Pratibha, your image tells of magical unicorns but I take it to mean the light and love which is real and thick around us which we cannot see but can, if we try, perceive with the senses we have forgotten how to use...hugs ?
Aaaawww thank you Marion for this lovely comment. It really is subject to your views and I love your take on it! On the topic of unicorns I was basically wanting to describe these creatures and show the magic they are....and even though they dont exist in our world...the reality is we have already crossed paths into our fantasy world where they exist and as a result part of our world.
I love the feedback. Great stuff!! Px?
Pratibha,
What a beautiful dedication to one of the most beautiful people I have ever met! Thank you for recognizing her beauty, too.
That is wonderful writing. I loved that. Simply gorgeous.
You're a wonderful writer, and person!
And so is Cheerie. (see Cheerie, I'm not the only one who says it).
Awesome, P.
Hugs,
Matthew.
Aaw thank you Matthew! So glad you liked it too!
Yes we all love cherie...
and a few others on here too ?
thank you for the ever lovely comments on my writings.
This site has really helped me define myself as a poetic...which I never even consider before...mainly cos my writings hardly rhymed!!
Have a great day! Until the next poem.....
Px?
Awww lovely I adore Unicorns xx❤️??
Aaaww thank you Jill! I see many do. Thanks for reading and support of my write Px?
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Pratibha I totally love this, words are compelling totally describe the mystical creatures. Amazing sentiment. A great write. Love the descriptive. Words!
Hey Saf. Thanks so much! Remember I read this to you when I just finished it. A completely different write for me to describe something.
Been great to hear your comments! Px?
Pratibha...just gorgeous! A beautiful dedication x
Thank you Tina. Really appreciate the visit. Big hugs xxx Px??
Often fantasy and reality are always intertwined in poet/esss's mind.
Agreed Yiyan. Thank you for taking time to read one of my early ones. Px😁