Poem -
..THE GHOST OF AMY..
THERE SHE WAS
HER FINGERS TICKLES ACROSS THE DUST..
I'M ON A ROAD
FAR FROM HOME...
THE SOUNDS OF HER PIANO ,WERE DWELLING IN THE COLD
THE WIND WHISPERED,MELODIES STRAIGHT FROM THE SOUL..
THE MOON REFLECTS ON HER FACE
HER FINGERTIPS KNOW THE WAY..
JUST A BRIGHT GLANCE I SAW
THE NEXT SHE WAS GONE..
THE ECHO OF HER LAST CHORD,STILL LINGERS IN THE AIR
I'VE SEEN HER FACE, I SWEAR..
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Hey Delmayne!!..........this is a very fine write!!...........the memory of love can linger for a lifetime......often manifesting as an apparition.........but what I love most about this piece is the way your words bring your accompanying picture to life...........some of the phrasing is just great........." The wind whispered melodies, straight from the soul.."............lovely my friend...........just lovely.............smiles...........T xo
HEY TONY IT ACTUALLY BEEN A WHILE SINCE I'VE START WRITING AGAIN BUT HEY THANX MAN
;-))))!!
MAYNE
Haunted an greatly dark..l feel yearning and desire
hey Mark thanx buddy..
mayne...
Trace..THANK YOU MY FRIEND
MAYNE...
like a haunting tune. Awesome xox
HEY, I TRIED MY BEST EFFORT THERE, I'M JUST REALLY GLAD PEOPLE ARE ENJOYING IT..
THANK YOU NARDINE YOU THE BEST!!
MAYNE...::-)))
This feels completely effortless, in the grandest way,
It's great, been a while since I've said wow and this deserves it capitalized
Like this WOW WOW WoW , I love it , and am babbling, so I'll shhhhhhh now lol.
LOL..NO KEEP TALKING..!! ITS PEOPLE LIKE YOU, THAT MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE MORE AND WITH EACH POEM, I'M PUSHING MYSELF TO DO BETTER..I TAKE MY HAT OFF FOR YOU...!! MY DEAR FREIND
MUCH LOVE FOR YOU NARDINE SANDERSON!!
MAYNE...::-)))!!