Poem -

A Gift for My Son!

How do I give my son a gift?

How do i wrap the moon?

Silver and gold have I none....

how do I wrap the sun?

What treasure could I un-earth-

that's worthy of his birth?

how do I give my son a gift?

How do i wrap the moon?

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PamelaHunt

One Chrsitmas I didnt have nuch money,I was sad,lying on a mattress on the floor...

I wondered how to show my kids how much I cared...I have three sons and three daughters...

I jumped up and grabbed a notepad and began to write!!

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Jimmy Arnold

Greetings Pam

And write you did....The gift of the true heart, such as this, which you poured out in this poem to your loved ones, was priceless and as precious a gift that anyone could have expelled from within, to their loved ones,. In place of the man in the moon you gave him the world, served in a silver spoon and in place of the beauties of the sun, you’ve given to him the brightest gift of life and with you his life spelled fun… More than any mere present can overcome….It/s the gift of thoughtfulness that matters more than any other…….You had only your heart to share, instead you gave it all to him....This gift is one which will never be forgotten, taken, broken or changed, they will remain immortalized for ever....Very good writing from the heart, of the heart and truly by the heart.......

Warm Regards,

Jim

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PamelaHunt

Thanks Jim..that was a very lengthy review shows you care...what things have you written?

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