Poem -
~~The Gift of the Present Tense
Life is too short
To look at what’s gone wrong
Nothing changes after time;
So what's the use in looking around?
.
I want to embrace the here and now
It may not be popular; but it works for me
I need to leave the past, in the past tense
And give myself the gift of reality
.
Looking over my shoulder
Hoping that the scenery
Would suddenly turn by osmosis
From winter snow to summer rain; is not reality
.
Only when I look ahead, with sobriety
Put my trust in God
And begin to trust His judgement
Can I even begin to realize my limitless potential
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Flower you're adorable and thanks, it's part of my personal affirmation project and I have lots of work to do believe me lol, I'm a def. glass half empty kind, but what the hell 'the journey of a thousand miles have to start with one step...' thanks again for the comment, Flower...I enjoy the interactive element of this site...cheers
Thanks Barry, not sure of mankind, but I believe that being positive can really help me, I'm giving it a go and see what happens...cheers mate
Thanks Cherie, so sorry to hear that about your health; I already pray for you and T, and I know God is blessing you both...honestly I rely on you and Mr. Taylor for positive vibes, and I've never been disappointed, (hope that doesn't come across as selfish) sometimes it's not the poetry I read but the willingness to share something of value with others that I always appreciate; not something I see everyday in folks (trust me I don't have that 'sharing' gift) just saying...but hopefully by beholding...
this is VERY new territory for me, but affirmation (I hate to admit it) really does work...I started a new business and took some courses that opened my eyes to this 'practical' approach to the day...I'm always a bit hesitant to apply anything practical and realistic to poetry though, I've always seen poetry as a place to escape to; somewhere safe and controlled, and as interesting as I can make it for myself, my hideaway from reality...but I've learned a lot by interacting with and reading the works of some incredibly talented and fearless poets on this site so I'm understanding that reality (though dull for me at times) can yield a bountiful harvest...yes you're right 'what happens now IS what decides the future' well said...ttyl
Hey Mamma Jamma............I'm glad I caught this.........I think (from what I've heard) that you are making an effort in the direction of your own limitless potential................you are so talented my brother..........I feel that no matter what you try.........you will be successful............I miss your unique talent around here.........and your stellar comments which have inspired me on many occasions..........cool write man!!....well done........ttyl............T xx
Thanks Jane, I hear you... will try to apply myself...
an epiphany...only knew the word from it being mentioned in the simpsons movie....aint it great when u realise what you got is what you got .. what will come will come when it comes .. here and now is the most valuable gift we have as the past is never more and the future can only be appreciated when it comes
Hey T, for some reason I haven't seen your comment before now, thanks my brother...prayers for you on your procedure...you always amaze and inspire me
Colin Stewart, virtual hi-five to you pal, and long suffering brothers in arms Leaf fans...thanks for saying that eh
Evrod, that's where I heard the word epiphany too, thanks man
Very thoughtful, I have to say you have a way with words.The last four lines of this poem really got me thinking, especially the part about Sobriety and God. Thats how I have lived the last three years, since i began my recovery. Beauitful sequencing.
Thanks Chandel (my newest friend) very nice thing to say...I'm def. a work in progress when it comes to living in the present tense, so I must approach the very principle of the thing in a intentional way and be realistic as well...like U2 said 'nothing changes on new years day' so waiting for osmosis to take effect is not the answer, and so we move and hope to gain a little positive ground here and there...congrats on your last three years...appreciate your kind words