Poem -

the girl who knew. ( my first hero charictor who is female)

 there once was a girl, who knew not what to do, who fealt like she was not free.

she lived out by the country side by the orange, the bananna, the oak and the aple tree.

she fealt left out, what was she all about, her morrals and her rights.

she fealt like she had no friends, but it really depends.

her brothers always fight.

but she never gave up, she never gave in.

she had a dream big and true.

to make a camp, to have a life stamp. 

where the summer sky was always blue.

so she asked her family and freinds, who surprised her in the end.

to invest in a piece of land.

not she got her camp, a real nice life stamp.

and the end is really grand.

because to this day, the people always say.

I love summer camp on the summery sand.

R.M.

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Russel James Mackie

I just read this for the 10nth time and realised the rythem was off at the end and it ended to fast. I welcome friendly criticism as well as friendly ways on how I could do better. thanks.

R.M.

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