Girl With a Blue Vase

Now, on looking back,
I remember
clearly, how she used
to carry water
from the courtyard,
to her motherâs house
and then back again ..
More than two miles
each way
and every day, in that
tall, salt glazed,
lapis blue, earthenware
pitcher of hers ..
The same one that she
carried home
from the market during
the infamous drought
of twenty sixteen ..
I also recall, how she
carried it high,
and so finely balanced
upon the pale shelf,
of her naked left shoulder ..
And of how
the sunlight then caught
and played
directly upon the silver
buckles of her
worn leather sandals ..
Indeed those
she would only ever wear
when weaving
her way home through
the scorching
red sand and occasional
contrasting
patches, of respite cool,
crisp, fallen leaves ..
She might find on her
way back again ..
Yes those, which were
once maybe,
old windblown robins
nests stolen ..
From off the branches
of long deceased trees ..
But of course,
they felt, so much kinder
to the feet
of lone travellers than that
way back then ..
Yet were still perfectly
mismatched
and as much out of place
as the girl with her old
blue vase
did sometimes seem ..
And though sad,
I confess, I now see her
far less and then only her
silhouette ..
But hear this, I know
and only too well ..
There is an old blue vase
and a young girl,
still out there somewhere
just waiting to be found ..
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NICELY WRITTEN GOOD MEMORY INTERESTING POETRY LINDA
Thanking you kindly Linda .. another much appreciated visit my friend :)Â
my memories fade, love this imagery! cool write Neville!............................Jim
tis why I must write them all down quickly Jim .. as a matter of fact though, this was long in the making .. and in reality, this is one of them that just needed to be saved somewhere safe ..Â
And what a memory to have! Must've made a huge impression on you Neville. Mind you, it would, wouldn't it ... a girl and vase ... all that way just go get water... and was it clean water? How lucky we are to have taps x
Thank you kindly Tina .. a long story cut short I'm afraid .. She was the daughter of Dutch missionaries (now both deceased) .. Her name was Praya and for a while, we used to share a hut together when I was volunteering at Tanka Tanka psychiatric hospital .. and yes, we are very lucky to have taps and lots of other things many take for granted x
Just beautiful Nev...I hope one day to write memories in the haunting way that you do ...not the bitter way that I do ...hugs...hope all is well x
You shall, I am sure of it .. and thank you, not only for this particular visit .. but for being you :) x
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Oh Nev so richly and wonderfully written.
One of your best among many and in a way a tad for this reader-Â a certain haunting quality about it.
Nicely done my friend and enjoyed reading through-out.
Full honours and certainly well earnt here :)
What a smashing thing to suggest Shaun many of my most sincerest thanks are on their way by return and the cheque is in the proverbial post mate :)Â
Every now and then, something stirs in the old memory box .. and the pen just seems to take over ..
Cheers Shaun, your visits and opinion of my little scribbles always means a lot to me my friend ..
AGT's NevilleÂ