Poem -
Glimmer
I'm almost at the end...
I can feel it sinking in...
the glimmer shines...
like silver vines...
before the sky goes dim...
And in the bitter street lights glow of orange that warns of what's below...
thoughts once scattered in my head...
have found a place to sleep instead...
The cobalt shades that swarm above...
acidic rain to strong to love...
A thousand fires burning blue... could not distort the sight of you...
for in that moment filled with grace...
I'll find myself and break these chains...
And though the sadness seeks me out...
despite it's strength
and all its doubt ...
I'm not as weak as I once was...
because of you and all your love.
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Comments
Hi Tyson A lovely write it reads beautifully
of love conquering all i`m guessing
very much enjoyed this
Best wishes Debs
Thank you so much! You are exactly right. It can be interpreted several ways but love conquering all was the inspiration when I first wrote it. Your comment means so much to me. I love hearing how something I created affects complete strangers. I always want the reader to enjoy it. It let's me know maybe I'm not all that bad at this. Its my only real talemt. :) gotta nurture it. :)
Hey TYSON!!....I agree with DEBS!!....... this flows beautifully .......filled with some compelling imagery & phrasing........ the ending is well delivered.........ALL STARS........ well done..... and........WELCOME to COSMO!!.......T xo
Wow thank you...I'm really enjoying this site. I belong to another site as well and it's been surprising and amazing hearing feedback about what I write. I never thought people would like it so much. Thank you. Trying to post some more. Been a little slow. "Reckless" is #2 ...just put it up" ;)