Poem -
Glow
she had a strange light
all about her,
which she wore like a
pair of drawn
curtains, to let all her
shadows
breathe easy, she said ..
and while
those she did cast both
fore and aft,
appeared golden, not
one of her
disciples then glowed ..
but in that
moment she stumbled
and fell, each
one of those disciples
could tell she
was far from perfect
and her robe
was but sackcloth, hastily
throwed ..
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Hi Neville, I thoroughly enjoyed this one......think we all have some sort of barrier that we show to the world, an ability to mask what we consider the (less pleasing) aspects of our personalities ...but somtimes those windows aren't glazed well causing a draft that blows the curtains open
Lorna xxx
what a very kind review you have left for me Lorna .. many thanks indeed .. I cherish every word .. Neville xx
Hello Nev...
What you see is what you get?
The bottom line is the one that matters most?
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank you for dropping in .. I like what I see my friend .. Neville
This needs words I just don't have right now...Will be back x
I'm counting on it ..
Bless you our M .. no rush, no pressure, no worries whatsoever xx