Poem -
God in the crib
Will one day I marry?
There are many
But who's right for you?
Will that day come soon?
Might the branches of trees
Extend their luxury?
And as for the sky,
Hasn't it always been shy
And the birds more silenced
Than you'd like?
The cars just hiss by.
The streets are dangerous at night
And I am God in the crib
In the circle of life.
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Comments
Not my best attempt.
If I was God my first line of response would be
don't bother 🤣
It's a romanticism and marriage is really complex if you haven't literally married your soulmate then you almost certainly will at some time in the marriage regret it. It takes two people truly in sync for it to become and orchestra of dreams. Sorry to dampen the romanticism but what I say is true, I wish someone would have said this to me. 🌹
That sense of humour is a bit on the dark side. I'll let you in a secret, I've got dark humour also
And if we're god, I wouldn't bother either.
Yes , you get it lol
Some beautiful lines create a feeling of Yearning throughout this write R. Last two lines shout the uniqueness of Rory. x
I like the title and the last lines too much to ignore this. If you don’t mind….
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