Gods Will
We humans sleep in dream state slumber
While demons creep with violent thunder
Soundless souls lay still insecure
Devils sent forth to man made pure
In night While earth spins in axis
Stars give birth to asteroid galactic
Forming in heavens dark cosmic
Awakening Gods tormented tsunamic
I lay still on my atomic mattress
In dreams of questions unanswered
While ghosts on landen gather
To attack my flesh with endless fodder
I cannot live on through lifeless lies
Acting out with ignorant eyes
For sand does smother my screaming lung
My heart buried in rendered sun
War continues to rage in brutal display
Limbs and heads fall like acid rain
Gia's tears pour from earthly scream
Drowning Angels in starlight dream
The Powerful have sided with Satan
In riches they settle while time does taken
For when they age to disease and plague
His grip upon there soul is made
Fiend surround my resin chamber
Hacking and cutting with dark saber
Exposing my heart to there filthy teeth
But light shines forth from heavenly beat
So to lightworkers dormant to long
Awaken to the sound of trumpets song
Eyes wide open and soul so still
The time has come to embrace Gods will.
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But wait, what are these words I preach
Talk of Angels and Gods and all they teach
For I am not religious or righteous man
I myself am a sinner to Gods plan
Guilty of procrastination and lust
Willing to let my body become but dust
Alcohol and drugs are friends of mine
Cursing faith with tears I cry
I live within an android mind
Scrolling endless on digital tide
Distant to my family and friends
Don't listen to me, I am just pretend.
I love this...did you write it?
Love the rhyme scheme, well written !
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Thank you 💛
I love your main work also Gerard which to me speaks of weariness...of the world, mankind and perhaps most of all...ourself ...hugs x
I did write it, my comment was supposed to be part of the original poem but I decided to make it a comment to keep it separate, its symbolic to my dual personality, arguments with myself over including God in my poetry, I do not want to come off as preachy or religious, I wrote it in a state of drunkenness.
Thanks for commenting,
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I think in poetry or creative writing (hate the word poetry which conjures up to me long words hearts and flowers) ...we are entitled to write about anything we like...I have long considered writing to be firstly...a conversation with one's own soul...
I wouldn't worry about what others think...x
That's exactly it, I am having a conversation with my soul, my soul wrote the poem and myself wrote the comment. Now the debate ensues, much like prince Arjuna in battle with himself, I too need Krishna.
Thanks for commenting, 🧡
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Brilliantly done, love the fluidity of it.
really works
Enjoyed
Lorna
Thank you Lorna🧡
Gerard, poetry hats off to you sir.
A superb write throughout and more than admire your rhyming scheme and what you have to say and how you have said it.
Wonderfully woven and its all about human soul and its choice and journey.
Full honours to you and richly deserved for this captivating tour de force of a write and this is worthy of more than just 5 stars.
Great poem and enjoyed reading very much.
Thanks for sharing Gerard.👍
Thank you so much Shaun, 💓
Superbly crafted sir .. and flows sweeter than a pint of cold beer down a parched persons neck .. well worthy of the like, the stars and the pin .. Here's to many more mate :) Neville
Thank you Neville