Poem -

Goes over my head

I dont even like poerty.
It makes me feel im stupid. 

Cos when I read the words of other people's poems from a page in a book 
or the screen or my phone
From my eyes to my mind it goes 
And most of the time 
I don't get what the writer wrote.   

I'm like fuck man gimme a clue?
Please your analogies 

Or is it metaphors? 

I'm not sure of the difference 
I'm like. 
Couldn't you say this in a different way? 
You talk like that, day to day?
Yeah sure I am kinda low brow, working class.
That's my  guilt free admittance 

My best guess is that it's all very personal in some way, 
but someone else may relate 

Lastly I want to make this clear   I respect everyone that's  put pen to paper and been brave enough to share 

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sparrowsong

Hello Drillah...

There's so many writers and so many books...

Our of curiosity I researched different genres and authors for the genres...

I knew there were a lot of books, but the 7 digit numbers approximately because no one really knows and new authors coming out all over the place...

After the third genre and authors I said okay, they can have all that...

Sorry mom but,  there's enough starving artists and I don't need to be another one...

She always wanted me to write a book and I don't mind competition but, man, there's so many that have to eat...

​​​Everyone has a thing and I have always been different...

There's a bit of competition in my world but, they're over there and I'm over here...

Plenty of room...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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