Going to Corrosion

I take my poison on the rocks
with just a dash of bitters
I love that feeling
of inner corrosion
that only
cleansing acid can bring
Dispassionately dissolving
all the accumulated crud
clogging up my pores
The flaw of course
comes when the sludge is gone
and the liberating solution
commences to eat away at my core
until what was good within is no more
Just another case study
where the cure
is worse than the disease
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The cure is worst than the disease...Absolutely...
Thank You Steve for your wisdom.
I am sure a lot learn from you. I know I DO. I TRY ANYWAY!
sparrowsong and...ME
I better ALWAYS keep trying... I know I do
Superb execution and conclusion..I love this one it flows nicely and the overall sarcasm and irony of it all gives it its style you get a 5* from me...beautiful, great job Steve.
CO
Thanks... I really appreciate the kind words