Poem -

Going to Corrosion

Going to Corrosion

I take my poison on the rocks

with just a dash of bitters

I love that feeling
of inner corrosion
that only 
cleansing acid can bring

Dispassionately dissolving
all the accumulated crud 
clogging up my pores

The flaw of course

comes when the sludge is gone

and the liberating solution
commences to eat away at my core  

until what was good within is no more

Just another case study

where the cure 

is worse than the disease

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sparrowsong

The cure is worst than the disease...Absolutely...

Thank You Steve for your wisdom.

I am sure a lot learn from you. I know I DO. I TRY ANYWAY!

sparrowsong and...ME

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Steve Green

I better ALWAYS keep trying... I know I do

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Curious Onlooker

Superb execution and conclusion..I love this one it flows nicely and the overall sarcasm and irony of it all gives it its style you get a 5* from me...beautiful, great job Steve.

CO

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Steve Green

Thanks... I really appreciate the kind words

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