Little Golden box
Heart broken
I had a little golden box all tied with ribbons blue
And in that box I placed my heart and gave that box to you.
You kept it safe and free from harmÂ
You loved it night and dayÂ
And if you ever left that box my heart would fade away.Â
Years went by and still you had that box with ribbons blueÂ
And In that box my heart still beats
Forever true to you.
You kept it warm and free from cold
You cherished every beat
But then one day inside that box the sound of my heart weeps.
As you lay in bed and tightly hold that box with ribbons blueÂ
You close your eyes and softly say those words of  “I love you”
It was on that night the angles came and took you whilst you were sleepingÂ
No longer in that little box you hear the sound of beating. ?Â
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wow what great poemÂ
Aw many thanks Greg :)Â
your very kind :)Â
Beautiful poem Michelle..
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Wilford :)Â
BeautifulÂ
Thank you Peter :)Â
" WHAT, DO YOU SEE ? " IN A BOX ? Other, than a " gift " to be different ! From " the rest " ?? IT, is what you make of IT ! Which counts ? Really? Even, if, it, best be the same " as, last year " !
" WHAT'S ANOTHER YEAR," THEN ? " Well, " Christmas " time....actually. IF, you, put your mind to IT. " IN THE RIGHT WAY " ?
Hello, is IT, every thing, you ever wanted ? " ARE YOU PLEASED....A GAIN ? "Â :) :) :)Â X X XÂ
It’s what you put in a box that makes that box become very special ?
" IT " is in " WHAT ? " you could get out of it, as well ? " That " defined by shining golden " rays of hope " bereft, of certainty. Infragility, creating the digression, to " move mountains," even away from VOLCANO scenario. Belying " Home Comforts " exploration of masquerade, and, escapade. Whether, " crisis " adaptation be necessary, or not. Free, of illusion, and, disillusion. Where " Requiem, For A Dream " reaps dividends, at both ends, in capital-gains, and, " flames " !! LIT, BY " CANDLES " of Romantic GOTHIC " Poetic " film-set production qualities. Even, if " A Night To Be Remembered " is the only creative result, as compared to natural instinctive connections. Where, " IT " makes more of you, than ever dreamt possible. " ANYWHERE, ANYTIME. " Right ? :) :)
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" SCENT, OF A WOMAN " ? :) :)
A truly awesome write on love. So sad but excellently excuted with a box metaphor. Px
Thank you so much ? x
Very sweet, loving words. Great work!
Thank you so much ?Â
So very sad, but nevertheless .. also very much enjoyed ..
Neville :)