Poem -
Golden Days
The warm sun kissed the air
With a golden light
Reflected off of water
That stood still and crystalline
Like a lake of amber
Shining in the afternoon
When storm clouds loved to gather
They would send a rain
That sent all to scatter
Home to get a hardy meal
Finish the day in a loving hug
By the ones who cared
Each memory is a treasure
One that cannot be replaced
No matter what one wishes
Time cannot be undone
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Comments
Very sentimental. Love it x
Thank you very much for your comment
Lorainela or LoLo.. :}
Lovely lovely lines Lorainela. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
Thank you so much glad to be here
Lorainela
Nice write!" each memory is a treasure" welcome................................................Jim
I find as I get older that memories become very important...
As loved ones pass on or friends marry and leave.
It is all about the moments we shared.
Lorainela
"Each memory is a treasure" -- I pick the same line as Jim before seeing his comments above -- This shows great minds are like ha ha
I love your comments... thank you
Lorrainela
Wow! What imagery. The structure and feeling of this write reminds me that poems dont need to be extremely long and detailed to be extremely engaging. Well executed. Wishing you all the best. Happy holidays. The Fish of the Sea
What starts off as a nice little poem goes on to spill beautiful images from words and just as the reader thinks "hmmm that's nice" that last line hits home like a well targeted sledgehammer. A powerful line indeed!
Brutal...but oh so very, very true.
Welcome to Cosmo x