golden grave´s

Through tha desert i crawl like a snake´s belly,
sweltering sun strips my skin bare ,
my mouth as dry as a sheik´s boot,
golden sand blowing everywhere.
how long can i last,
i have no more tears to cry ,
i cant even break a swet,
hungery bird´s wait for me to die.
this heat is getting unbearable,
this desert want´s me dead ,
get up and walk and less of that talk ,
a voice screams inside my head ,
i stood up like a solider,
and began to march ahead
i dont want to die in this golden grave,
i want to live my life instead ,
walking for hours until i come to a stop ,
and looked up at the scorching sun,
then water brushes across my blistered feet
and realize i am standing in the ocean .
ALIVE
writen by
paul o carroll
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Your writing is getting better and better Paul. Love the concept and where you go with this one, nice write:)
wow that was so nice if you rachle thanks
i wont get a chance to wtire for a week , tommorow i go to ireland for a beake with my little girl ,
talk soon and thanks again rachle keep up the good writing
Plenty of chance to get lots of ideas for your writing on your break Paul!! Have a lovely time and look forward to reading more of your stuff when you return!
thanks rachel xx
brilliant piece paul ,so heart lifting at the end of all the inner turmoil . keep rising !! tina x
thanks tina glad you liked it xx
thanks susan i love this one at last i got one right ,