gone

My tears tell it allย
I could not speak
My tears keep pouring out of control
I could not breathe ....my life
Her eyes were open
Her lips were painted red...no speech
Still and calm she lay
No air....no life
I could not speak....I tried
There was....now.....no more but silence
I watch my Love
Sadden with helplessness
Her eyes finally rested
Every limb cold...still...no more
I touched her...I touched her.....I touched her
My tears keep pouring...pouring...no stopping
My tears told it all
My Love .....my lover forever ...Gone
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Comments
I think it's the short lines; the tiny pinprick images here: which give this piece its real power. As though you can't bear to show the reader the full picture all at once.
Remarkable!
J ;)ย
Thank you Jason....appreciated thx
Again