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gone

gone

My tears tell it allย 

I could not speak

My tears keep pouring out of control

I could not breathe ....my life

Her eyes were open

Her lips were painted red...no speech

Still and calm she lay

No air....no life

I could not speak....I tried

There was....now.....no more but silence

I watch my Love

Sadden with helplessness

Her eyes finally rested

Every limb cold...still...no more

I touched her...I touched her.....I touched her

My tears keep pouring...pouring...no stopping

My tears told it all

My Love .....my lover forever ...Gone

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Jason Brown

I think it's the short lines; the tiny pinprick images here: which give this piece its real power. As though you can't bear to show the reader the full picture all at once.

Remarkable!

J ;)ย 

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