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Gone too soon but never, ever forgotten 💙

Gone too soon but never, ever forgotten 💙

Awww the sheer agony of it all

As another young soul met his maker and he answered God’s call

And there he lies amidst the  daffodils by that engraved granite small wall

With his name etched within mournful melancholy from his rise and fall.
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Each and every minute and second of a brand new day

His loved ones and dearest think of him as they kneel to pray

Knowing he is at peace but this just adds to their dismay

Oh my dear Lord.. why did you have to take him away?
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Coz It is the ones who are left bearing this pain

Yon tearstained pillows are soaked once again

Can a Mother’s mournfulness make her go insane?

As each moonlit night is just another weary wax and a wane..
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And that clock keeps ticking upon the wall in the hall

With it’s rhythmical beat sounding louder from such a sickening appal

But that time has stopped dead as it fired out a cruel cannon ball

One stares into the starkness as every inch of life has gone awol..
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Gone too soon but never, ever forgotten

As Mother folds up his blue-checked shirt and presses it to her nose to sniff the fresh, clean cotton

And yet another teardrop trickles slowly down her pale cheek. Oh how this lovely lass feels rotten

Amidst her hollowed out heartbreak that is merely a massive shaft that alas has shotten ...
 

         

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Marion

Aw Jill...i've got no words...just tears. You have captured the horror and bleakness of it all in your beautiful work...he would be so honoured...you are such a beautiful caring soul..thankyou for caring...lots of love...❤️❤️❤️
 

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Jill Tait

Thank goodness u think its okay luv 💕❤️😢❤️💕❤️

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Marion

It's more than ok you are a gifted poet Jill and such a caring soul...it's full of feeling and empathy...mother to mother. You know what I dread...the first time somebody asks me how many children I have...I will always have two but from now on I shall have to say...one 💔💔💔

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Jill Tait

Nooooo Never ever say one you have two always as I said gone just sleeping but never, ever forgotten lovely lass 💕💙💕

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Greg Etsell

wow what wonderful poem 
sad yes but did a great job 
great work and Marion is right 
you are gifted poet and you 
have wondeful heart 

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Jill Tait

Awws ❤️❤️❤️ Thanking you as always Greg 💙💙💙

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