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Good Aftermoon

Good Aftermoon

Our existence real, beneath the brilliance of moon,
That night grasped as if nothing left,
Absence of heart, I nearly swoon.

Reflecting radiant beauty drank in with every breath
Quick dining for deserts of the flesh,
Our existence real, beneath the brilliance of moon.

Woven souls too high in heavens, to expect a cleft,
Faded beauty dark carried off in the chariots of death,
Absence of heart, I nearly swoon.

Remember moon glow head held safely in your breast
That kiss of million fireworks nothing to is next,
Our existence real, beneath the brilliance of moon.

Deep in olden thoughts if ever meaningless
Now sorrow and sadness a river of booze, i've gone adrift,
Absence of heart, I nearly swoon.

I know your there that day except
I lost the way, self riddled with disrespect,
Our existence real, beneath the brilliance of moon,
Absence of heart, i'll be with you soon.

This is a villanelle I dedicate to the one who gave me a challenge.

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Devon La Porte

Thank you Cherie it is so great to hear this i put so much thought into this one and it was definitely a challenge but i truly enjoyed writing this one. Your sheer brilliance of originality comment brought a smile to my face, i am definitely going to write another one.

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