Hey MANON!! :...I haven't read you before (my loss)..... this is a lovely Haiku....... perfect formatting......... and since the Japanese invented the Haiku and most often wrote of nature....... I'd say you chose perfect subject matter ........ALL STARS....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Ā ?ā³ā“ā
Thank you very much G. They are somewhat difficult. I have a few that I have done in my library this morning. I am unsure if I wish to post them or not.
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Hey MANON!! :...I haven't read you before (my loss)..... this is a lovely Haiku....... perfect formatting......... and since the Japanese invented the Haiku and most often wrote of nature....... I'd say you chose perfect subject matter ........ALL STARS....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Ā ?ā³ā“ā
ah Tony, thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it.
Please feel free to check me out!
ā”M
Your first attempt? You nailed it!.... Please write more....I can't wait to read....This is beautiful
Ah Rose,Ā
Thank you so much. You make my mind wonder. .... to try again! I shall.
Thank youĀ
ā”m
Well done for a great Haiku, I haven`t tried to do one yet! I love the photo you`ve used, it looks so peaceful.
A superb little piece Manon, well done honey.
Love G xx
Thank you very much G. They are somewhat difficult. I have a few that I have done in my library this morning. I am unsure if I wish to post them or not.
Hugs
ā”M
I'm with D, I am not a huge fan of of Haiku...but you truly nailed this!Ā
Such a delightful piece. Words which make you smile.Ā
Well done.Ā
Thank you Soul.Ā
I appreciate it.
I gave it a try. I think I'll stick with all the other kinds of fun things that I write about.Ā
Death
Sex
Spiritual
Agony
Life's struggles.
Hahahaha funny ones!
Haha. That made me laugh:)
Desires & Pain -- I take them both to the extremes. I write straight straight from emotion. Both suppressed & surfaced.Ā
So you definitely are far more diverse than I am. Ā
Want me to tell you the truth Soul?
Each and every thing I write, I feel. And if I write something sensual, trust me it excites me hahahahaha!Ā
If I write something soulful orĀ heartbreaking, I feel it. I have cried over most of my work.
I feel so deeply and unfortunately writing is the only way I know how to get it out.Ā
ā”M