Hey MANON!! :...I haven't read you before (my loss)..... this is a lovely Haiku....... perfect formatting......... and since the Japanese invented the Haiku and most often wrote of nature....... I'd say you chose perfect subject matter ........ALL STARS....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
Thank you very much G. They are somewhat difficult. I have a few that I have done in my library this morning. I am unsure if I wish to post them or not.
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Hey MANON!! :...I haven't read you before (my loss)..... this is a lovely Haiku....... perfect formatting......... and since the Japanese invented the Haiku and most often wrote of nature....... I'd say you chose perfect subject matter ........ALL STARS....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
ah Tony, thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it.
Please feel free to check me out!
♡M
Your first attempt? You nailed it!.... Please write more....I can't wait to read....This is beautiful
Ah Rose,
Thank you so much. You make my mind wonder. .... to try again! I shall.
Thank you
♡m
Well done for a great Haiku, I haven`t tried to do one yet! I love the photo you`ve used, it looks so peaceful.
A superb little piece Manon, well done honey.
Love G xx
Thank you very much G. They are somewhat difficult. I have a few that I have done in my library this morning. I am unsure if I wish to post them or not.
Hugs
♡M
I'm with D, I am not a huge fan of of Haiku...but you truly nailed this!
Such a delightful piece. Words which make you smile.
Well done.
Thank you Soul.
I appreciate it.
I gave it a try. I think I'll stick with all the other kinds of fun things that I write about.
Death
Sex
Spiritual
Agony
Life's struggles.
Hahahaha funny ones!
Haha. That made me laugh:)
Desires & Pain -- I take them both to the extremes. I write straight straight from emotion. Both suppressed & surfaced.
So you definitely are far more diverse than I am.
Want me to tell you the truth Soul?
Each and every thing I write, I feel. And if I write something sensual, trust me it excites me hahahahaha!
If I write something soulful or heartbreaking, I feel it. I have cried over most of my work.
I feel so deeply and unfortunately writing is the only way I know how to get it out.
♡M