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goodbye

goodbye

how do you say goodbye
to a fellow spirit
he wasn't quite the same
as anyone that I ever knew
he was oposite
he was kind
he was deeper than seven layers
how do you say goodbye
I say it
with my children
and my childrens children
because he would have loved to have
shared a little time..with them
look how bright their eyes are..!
my brother  in law..x
love is always un determined
it is non critical
it is forever flowing
it is hurtful as sometimes..we don't understand
things get 'lost' in translation
miss read..miss interpreted
and you write a story that was not the 
picture portrayed
but..the essence of a person cannot be denied
and that is love
it is beyond the superficial
intrinsic
bare metal
goodbye Behr......

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pauline codd

its just rolled off my fingers without editing..I have a sad funeral to go to...for someone I have know for forty years...a big character..and well liked man...not born here..born thousands of miles away from England..but made his life here against the odds.  People are all the same all over the world..we only want to enjoy life..and bring up our families..yet governments create a hell for all....with their dictating..subliminal slavery..and we can not lift a finger.  I grow sad with the world..but in the eyes of my grandchildren I can't dampen their spirit...as it is new for them.  I only just came on this medium...it's wonderful here..it's like drawing from the soul..thankyou for your kind words..I am doused in sadness ..intermittent...but life goes on.

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pauline codd

like...yes..do not become bitter..then they have won.

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