Goodbye

Rebecca,

You say goodbye but we say hello and you write better with your pen, than the knife or razor, used by the character in your poem. Her way leaves scars and yours, beautiful lasting memories, tattooed with elegance and precision, on the hearts and souls, of your (flock to your poems), readers...Hope the poem is just a poem and not a prelude....

Kind regards,

Jim

Dear Poetess,

Extremely beautiful theme has been selected generating parallel structure of the poem. The following lines realize us reality of striving life:

"I can't do anything right

It always ends up a fight"

Regards,

Ravindra Kumar   

Man... Save your own self from yourself. No pill, no boy, no band, just you and your own decisions. My brother killed himself. When I saw his face, he wasn't happy or relieved. He looked terrified. That was it. No going back ever. Hope this is just a beautiful poem and not a goodbye letter. And, no, I'm not some happy go lucky extrovert that never feels pain. Go read my poems, they are agony on another level. "My body is unreal, a cloak draped over me, over the 'real' me, but he is dead and gone, wretched and ill; a hopeless beggard dressed in rags."---- See, I'm unhappy and shit, but suicide is foolish. Wish you the best and Ill be hoping to see many more poems on here from you.

That is true, I was too focused on the topic. You are so beautifully honest in this poem. Consider a career like child protection or phychology, don't let your sadness bog you down, use it to help others. You have a precious set up for a positive life if you choose. And thanks about my brother, it is too unreal sometimes. "I put before you LIFE and DEATH, therefore choose life, my son."

*Psychology

You know human life is just the start right

I on some occasions am filled with wonder when I contemplate death.

Like everything in the the universe it's just a cycle we as human beings have to go threw.

We are just passengers:)

The only problem is the reincarnation thing if it is infact true.

Then we as human beings being thus the most aware and self conscious beings on this planet have a responsibility to be the guardian s of nature.  And the irony in these Times with the state of the world is truly sad.  I love trees:) I'd like to come back as a tree feel the wind and the sun on my bark;)hopefully out in a Forrest where no human psychopathic could cut me down.  Although by the time my seed is born there probably won't be any Forrest left.

Nice poem

Perhaps well be seeds of the same tree Rebecca

Liam

You are such a beautiful sweet young girl and a talented writer and you should say that to yourself every day sweety, because I am telling you the truth honestly I truly am honey. You really are gifted and it would be such a terrible shame to lose you when there is real genuine help for you here.

I would like to personally offer you my help as I can see from your writing that you are suffering a terrible amount of emotional and physical pain. If I could, I would take you in my arms and just hold you tight, so I am sending you a huge hug through these words.

Your work shows your emotional pain so plainly so keep on writing your feelings down as it is a positive way for you to put all that hurt into perspective and it will help you to release it all and give you a break from it.

If you would like to talk in private sweety you are very welcome to get in touch with me and I will give you my personal email address. To off load your pain to someone who is there and wants to really help you will do you the world of good sweety and I promise that what you tell me will never go any further than me as I value your privacy.

In the meantime give yourself permission to get some much needed rest and say to yourself every day when you are having these feelings that you have the right to be here and to seek happiness.

You are still very young and have your whole life in front of you and sweety you can have a good, interesting and fulfilling life if you just allow yourself to accept help.

I have certainly gone through a lot of pain so I am genuinely offering my help if you want it as I know and have suffered what you are going through many times. Life does have difficulties, but we can learn from them and you will eventually see that as you get older the good times will far out way the bad times.

You are stronger than you think sweety and a talented writer and your Mum must be very proud of you, you should be proud of yourself too as you deserve to be.

Love George xx