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Jim "The Lad" ....

Eternal Life is returning to live with Heavenly Father after final judgement, through the merits of the Savior, in my faith.........thanks for reading!

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Being Me

You can write a decent Haiku, Jim ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ very well done โš˜x

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Marion

Inspiring words Jim...found some comfort in them ๐Ÿค—

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Jim "The Lad" ....

thank youย  Marion!ย  for your comment and supportย  !so glad you felt the HG!

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Shelley-anne St...

Gorgeous. Very true. Gotta love a good haiku ๐Ÿ™‚ powerful and well done my friend โ˜€

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Shaun Cronick

Jim many thanks for writing this fine and most warmly welcomed haiku.
And hope is for me I do treasure the most.
Thanks again Jim and may God Bless and Keep you.
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