The Green House On 22nd Street

Just three blocks over from our family's home
There's a green house that keeps invading my dreams
And it has been calling to me for so long
That I can tell you the details, of each scene
Even though in real life, I've never been or seen, inside
So, how is it that I know so much, of its people, and lives
I know that the kitchen is silver and white
I know that there's a child there who never, ever, cries
And yet I know her, we've played together many times
The dreams are so vivid that I remember when awake
And I've walked down the block just to gape
And stood there quite frozen, I cannot escape
That somehow I've always known this place
I remember the garden, in the back, through the gate
And I've played with the child there, no mistake
I know that I know them and it's making me late
I rush to my bedrooms dreamscape
Upstairs there's a fancy stone fountain
And a stuffed falcon on the wall
And a pretty laced fringe from the four posted bed
Yet I know that I've not been there at all
How can I know these things, while awake
When I know that its all just my dreaming of late
Or the possibility I may be insane
No, I cannot accept this as fake
So years go by and I've moved away
But the dreams of the green house won't fade
And again I approach the child through the gate
And we sit, and we talk, 'til I've played there all day
It seems that there is no escape
So I return home, and as I walk down the lane
A plan in my head, formulates
I approach the front door, my heart hesitates
I'm aware, just back of the door, a child waits
I cannot knock, every fiber in me is afraid
Real terror, utter terror
My heartbeat slows, I calm down
As I realize, I'm walking away.........
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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so much suspense. and then you just walk away. I wanted to read something different. nevertheless, the extra-sensory perception of this house that is haunting/permeating your dreams, could hint to a past life, where this mysterious child is actually your son or daughter. however, the imagination is vivid at times. this is a great write. I thank you for sharing it.
I thank you so much Glenn, the reason that the suspense ended as it did is because it's all true......I still dream of that house.....and the only time I was able to approach the house I literally froze with fear...I just couldn't knock....and I felt relief as i walked away.......the house is still there......perhaps it's not the end of the story yet?...............thanx again my friend.............tony
Spooky spooky doo!! is there a part two to this superb piece? Just when I thought I was going to get to the answer!! you upped and walked away on me!! Get your bot sat back down and write me a part two before I go potty with suspense!! Superb writing T` well done kidda. Love G xx
Hi Girlfriend, well, I guess you're right....I'm going to have to do a follow-up, but in order to do that I'm going to have to go home......could be a while...........big hugs.......tony xx
Well Curtis, I don't know what to say, I've gotten a lot of feedback on this, and your breakdown of this is definitely motivating, you know what I wish? I wish you could take a look at my blog.....then you'd see why this is messing with my head.......regardless, it seems I'm going to have to go home and visit that house again...........I don't know if I should thank you....or run away and hide, however I have to say, your breakdown of the poem is spot on......thanx.man,...........tony