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" THE GREEN HOUSE ON 22nd STREET "

" THE GREEN HOUSE ON 22nd STREET "

Just three blocks over from our family's home
There's a green house that will not leave my dreams alone
It has been calling to me for so long
That I can tell you the details of each scene of these dreams
Even though in real life, I've never been, or even seen, inside...

So how is it that I know so much of it's residents and lives
I know that the kitchen is silver and white
I know there's a child there, who never, ever, cries
And yet I know him, we've played together many times....

The dreams are so vivid that I remember them when I wake
Been oddly motivated to walk down 22nd street, just to gape
I've stood before the house quite frozen, I cannot escape the idea
That somehow I've always known this place....

I recall the garden, in the back, through the gate
And I've played with the child there, there is no mistake
I feel that I know him, and something's making me late
I rush to my bedroom, and the dream that awaits...

Upstairs there's a fancy stone fountain
A stuffed falcon on the wall
A pretty laced fringe, dangling, from the four posted bed
Yet, I know that I've never been there at all...

How can I know these details, while I'm awake
When I know that it's all just my dreaming of late
Or the haunting possibility, that I may be insane
"NO!" my mind screams, "This cannot be fake!"

So years go by, and I've moved away
But the dreams of the green house won't fade
Again, I approach the child through the gate
And we sit, and we talk, 'til I've played there all day
And it seems that there is no escape
From this house, that has something to say...

So I return home, and I'm drawn to walk the lane
Where a plan, in my head, formulates
As I approach the front door my heart hesitates
And I'm acutely aware, that behind the door, a child awaits
Real terror, utter terror, grips me
My heartbeat slows, I calm down
As I realize
I'm walking away
And a tear
Slides down my face
And I think to myself
There WILL
Come a day......

Tony Taylor   (Chicago)
 

 

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Kimmy Alan

"Heavy Duty!"

Great work Tony.  Your poem sucked me in and didn't let go.  I felt it, more than I read it.

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Tony Taylor

"Heavy Duty!".........I love that!!..........thanx so much Kimmy.........Love and Rockets!!.........T xo

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sparrowsong

Tony...

Do you know if there is a closet...

Behind the front Door?

On the back wall...

Three different views on this house...

Thanks for the mystery...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Tony Taylor

YES SPARROW!!.(how'd you know that?)..........you know how a door opens in and to the left?.......well there's definitely a closet right behind the door to the left...not that the door opens in the dream but I can see it through those little windows at the top of the door when I think of knocking....I can always see the top of some picture or hanging object on the closet door through the little window on the top of the main door (it's not like the door in the picture)........there's the color red...........but that's all I can make out.......how in the hell could you know that?...........thanx for the mystery right back.........don't you think it's weird that this dream is in color?.........anyway..........thanx for the curiosity my friend.........and the cool comment............Love and Rockets!!..........T xo

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Christopher Correia

One of my favourite writes from you, T and from anybody actually, has a lot going in it and could have a hundred different interpretations....at the end where the dreamer can't go into the house, yet...this is gripping stuff, love that sequence... 

I'm walking away
And a tear
Slides down my face
And I think to myself
There WILL
Come a day......

 this is so clearly a quality write, even for folks who have no idea what a quality write is....  you posted this before but there are changes, the end seems to strike more of a mysterious note;  I was actually praying for more interesting and mind stretching poetry to contemplate, and this I am personally great -full to ingest, and while trying to be intentional in avoiding throwing out platitudes, this one has special things hoovering around it, and stands as truly one of the most memorable works.... blessings      

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Tony Taylor

Hey CHRIS!!.........you know what's so cool about this comment........not only did you recognize it as one my re-writes (which I find a necessity)..........but..........you also nailed the fact that all 6 of those lines you pointed out.........were completely new to the piece..........you're a friggin' genius at this commenting stuff.........I think you and Cherie should do it for a newspaper or something........you're both extraordinary at leaving helpful and amazingly insightful reviews..........thanx so much brother.........it's so good to hear from you Mamma Jamma!!............big hugz!!...........T xo

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sparrowsong

Tony to try to answer at least partly...

I had a recurring dteam...

I wish I could say that it was only three times...

The last time I dreamed about that house was a couple of years ago...

The first time I was about seven or eight...

Yes...

Inside the closet is another door that leads to further inside the walls of the house...

It's narrow inside and..

Sound proof. ..

Am I right?

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Tony Taylor

I don't remember going inside any closets Sparrow!!.......but I do remember it ALWAYS has an overwhelming quietness when I'm inside looking around.........you're really trippin' me out here Feathers!!..........hugz!..........T xo

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sparrowsong

Sorry for trippin' you out...

That's the only part I ever saw...

I could never get a look other than...

What I described...

I tried to peek around the corner I remember and...

Then it was...

Trouble...

Hugz...

sparrowsong

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