Poem -
Gunshot
Like 4 Pin it 1She's the logic
Behind an idea
Never far
Always near
I'm the vodka she's the beer
She's the paracetamol to a hungover head...
I'm the devil
On a shoulder
She's the angel
On the other
Whispering wisdom like no otherA self help book twice read...
She's the adrenaline
To too much medication
Travel insurance
To an overseas vacation
The calm to provocationThe speaker of wise words said...
She's the shopping
In the mall
I'm the alcoholics
Last call
Together we stand tall
We mix like gunshotShe's the powder, I'm the lead...
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This is friggin' off the hook bro!!...... could be an INCREDIBLY powerful rap song!!..... but no matter who you are or what you find from these extraordinary words..... one thing shines through....... you're sitting on a powder keg here!!..... explosive and love inspired!!....ALL STARS!! PINNED!!......smokin' grooves brother !!.......your cyber friend and admirer!!.......T xo ????✴???✴?
Thank you Tony for such a kind comment. I always appreciate your feedback. Sometimes I feel like I'm sitting on a power keg when I lie in until the afternoon over the weekend, but she puts up with me and that (among other things) is what makes her so special.
Love & rockets mate - Syd xo
Great write Syd with a very punky feeling. Great tribute to your better half.
Problem is it has my earworm head itching. Not the actual words but the overall feel of the piece reminds me of something and I'm thinking early Dr. Feelgood. Proper protopunk.
Again great write,
Nigel.
Thank you so much Nigel for your positive feedback. I think I'm slightly too young to remember Dr. Feel good (I have heard of them) I'm 35. But I'll Google them in the morning.
I'll be sure to stop by your page for a read tomorrow. I've had too much to drink on a school night.lol.
Take care - Syd
I was raised on milk and alcohol
Likewise, especially brown ale
You know what they say, Syd.
Opposites attract.
This was great, my friend. I truly enjoyed reading this.
Take care of yourself,
~Dean ✌
Thank you Dean. I'll try to take care of myself the best I can. So should you too I hope.
Take care - Syd