Nicely chosen verbs. I like sprouting and bursting, perfect for the subject matter plus there is the not so small matter of alliteration which I always like in a poem. Also colour finishes it perfectly. Lovely poem to greet a sunny Sunday - for now. 🌹
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Nicely chosen verbs. I like sprouting and bursting, perfect for the subject matter plus there is the not so small matter of alliteration which I always like in a poem. Also colour finishes it perfectly. Lovely poem to greet a sunny Sunday - for now. 🌹
Good morning dearest Bernie, a short one today. 🤣 Strict syllables thank you for your lovely review as always. Happy Sunday. 🌹
These are never easy, often misunderstood, but invariably beautiful .. Neville 🌹
Thank you my dear Nev, harsh syllable that's what makes them fun. 🌹
One of my most favourite positions & of course, as ever, you are most welcome🌹