Poem -
Hake
To me
The world was boredom itself
I always watched it in indifference
The smoldering summers
The freezing winters
Spring ends
Autumn begins
The seasons tediously repeat themselves
Like a pinwheel that continues
To spin only time passes by
To me the world was an
Unchangeable place
Not once was I irritated nor
Did I feel my heart skip with excitement
The colorless days passed by my eyes
And I was very discontent with the world
It was a raw plate of beef passed around
A table of cows
It seemed to enjoy itself
When its purpose was elsewhere
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Comments
Very interesting write curious onlooker xx
Opening lines are showed peculiarity of an ordinary man,...beautiful,..I like the motif.
"To me
the world was boredom itself
I always watched it in indifference"
Thank you for the acknowledgement Ravindra :)
I love this Curious, you drew me in with your lines. Beautifully written, such depth. The image was perfect. A vote from me:)
:) Thank you so much Rachel I appreciate it
Late replies but thank you Blossom you have my love as a fellow poet :)