THE HALLOWED MAN

A Christmas picture postcard dream
Snow covered hillside; farmyard scene
With dreamy clouds of silver haze
This beauty’s now a passing phase
The reasons it’ll never be
Pictured quite so easily
As a village place where neighbours meet
And stand about; and laugh; and greet
But desecration now commit
This hallowed man would come and sit
Beside the bus stop, near the pub
Where locals come to get their grub
This holy man, a trusted soul
But prayers were not his only goal
Luring in the congregation
Seeking choir boy’s consummation
Whilst sadly he procured the best
Would put these youngsters to the test
He’d use his wealth of wisdom; trust
To feed the chapel’s secret lust
The head of all that evil sought
A buyer of those; that should never be bought
A face of what was rightly good
Committing acts no ‘good’ man should
But sadly this went on too long
The choir boy came; performed his last song
To voice the end of a shameful decade
Where prior no one had come to their aid
The tears and hurt tolled from that bell
Concealing what was really hell
A place he no longer frequents
The good Lord sought his recompense
The hallowed man now comes to rest
Upon the park bench he knows the best
For this is now his country home
Despised; detested; all alone .......
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brilliant though sad write Rachel voted and nomed cheers x
Ah thanks Susan, appreciate your comments as always :)
Love this Rachel, really good story/poem which is about a sensitive subject which makes it gritty and compelling to read, X:)
Glad you enjoyed Jason, but I think it might have been too sensitive a subject lol!! I think I have upset the powers that be LOL!! :)
This is marvelous. I love the rhythm and flow, Great job.
Cheers Glenn, glad you enjoyed :)
Couldn't have said it better myself Susan!! I have done many writes in the past that portray some pretty harrowing scenarios, some based on true life events, it is something I always try and treat with respect whilst giving a true picture!! I think in this case maybe 'the church' was an issue but wrongs are wrongs, and deserve to be told! Thanks for reading and your kind comments Susan :)
WOA X WHAT A REACTION ! SORE SUBJECT BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN AS USUAL MY GIRL !
SOME PEOPLE ARE JUST SO NARROW MINDED ?
Ha ha, well that certainly would be said about you or me LOL!!! Thanks for your kind comments hun, much appreciated as always :)
Rachel- This is something! Woe.......hope that this guy on the bench feels sickened! He makes me rather sick, but the way you have written this sad episode is really, REALLY Well DONE! Quite a wakeup call to the head of the choir!
Take Care, Nancy
I know, think I rang a few bells lol!!! Thanks for your kind comments Nancy :)