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THE HALLOWED MAN

THE HALLOWED MAN

A Christmas picture postcard dream

Snow covered hillside; farmyard scene

With dreamy clouds of silver haze

This beauty’s now a passing phase

The reasons it’ll never be

Pictured quite so easily

As a village place where neighbours meet

And stand about; and laugh; and greet

But desecration now commit

This hallowed man would come and sit

Beside the bus stop, near the pub

Where locals come to get their grub

This holy man, a trusted soul

But prayers were not his only goal

Luring in the congregation

Seeking choir boy’s consummation

Whilst sadly he procured the best

Would put these youngsters to the test

He’d use his wealth of wisdom; trust

To feed the chapel’s secret lust

The head of all that evil sought

A buyer of those; that should never be bought

A face of what was rightly good

Committing acts no ‘good’ man should

But sadly this went on too long

The choir boy came; performed his last song

To voice the end of a shameful decade

Where prior no one had come to their aid

The tears and hurt tolled from that bell

Concealing what was really hell

A place he no longer frequents

The good Lord sought his recompense

The hallowed man now comes to rest

Upon the park bench he knows the best

For this is now his country home

Despised; detested; all alone .......

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Susan O'Reilly

brilliant though sad write Rachel voted and nomed cheers x

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BLOSSOM

Ah thanks Susan, appreciate your comments as always :)

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Jason Lee

Love this Rachel, really good story/poem which is about a sensitive subject which makes it gritty and compelling to read, X:)

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BLOSSOM

Glad you enjoyed Jason, but I think it might have been too sensitive a subject lol!! I think I have upset the powers that be LOL!! :)

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Glenn Marchand

This is marvelous. I love the rhythm and flow, Great job.

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BLOSSOM

Cheers Glenn, glad you enjoyed :)

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BLOSSOM

Couldn't have said it better myself Susan!! I have done many writes in the past that portray some pretty harrowing scenarios, some based on true life events, it is something I always try and treat with respect whilst giving a true picture!!  I think in this case maybe 'the church' was an issue but wrongs are wrongs, and deserve to be told!  Thanks for reading and your kind comments Susan :)

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Tracy Timothy

WOA X WHAT A REACTION ! SORE SUBJECT BUT VERY WELL WRITTEN AS USUAL MY GIRL !
SOME PEOPLE ARE JUST SO NARROW MINDED ?

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BLOSSOM

Ha ha, well that certainly would be said about you or me LOL!!!  Thanks for your kind comments hun, much appreciated as always :)

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Nancy Mcgowin

Rachel-  This is something! Woe.......hope that this guy on the bench feels sickened! He makes me rather sick, but the way you have written this sad episode is really, REALLY Well DONE! Quite a wakeup call to the head of the choir!

Take Care, Nancy

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BLOSSOM

I know, think I rang a few bells lol!!!  Thanks for your kind comments Nancy :)

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