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Hansel and Gretel

Hansel and Gretel

In a forest deep where shadows play

 

Two starving children wondered, lost astray

 

Hansel and Gretel, hand in hand 

 

Sought a path to a sugary land

 

A house made of sugary treats—a sweet surprise!

 

Walls made of gingerbread, frosted delight

 

Sugary windows gleamed in the light

 

Their eyes gleamed like the stars 

 

They knock at the door

 

An old witch greeted them with laughter's delight

 

Her bony fingers, old and fragile 

 

Bones scattered in the corner of the room

 

Bones of children

 

Eaten by a cannibalistic witch

 

Hansel locked in a cage

 

Gretel chained in the corner of the room 

 

Their bellies fat with baked goods 

 

Desserts of cookies, cakes, and pies

🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🥧🥧🥧🥧🥧

 

The witch was fattening them up for dinner

 

An oven with flames cooking

 

Gretel pushes the witch in her oven

 

The witch burning in the flames 

 

Hansel and Gretel escape from the witch's house

 

A lesson to never take food from witches

 

Or you might end up getting cooked for dinner

 

 

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Being Me

Sweets from a stranger. Not a good idea. But, looking at it another way  ... those kids helped themselves to parts of the house, if memory serves me right. That witch must've worked very hard on her home. Sweetly house proud. No wonder she was extremely unhappy with them.

Love your poetic version of this classic tale x

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sparrowsong

Hello Brett...

The Curse might be in the Because, you didn't...

Right?

Great House...

A Dentist for a Neighbor would be nice?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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