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Valerie Beasley...

Girlfriend!  I so agree!!!  Freedom and peace of mind makes my days so simple.

val

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Val just a haiku I'm happily married for now anyways lol x

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Valerie Beasley...

Oh Susan…that's wonderful!  I only lasted 7 years!  Now I'm too old to change my ways!

val

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Susan O'Reilly

Val funny i started writing poetry at 44 when planning my 1st and very late marriage mightn't even last 7 years lol it was my midlife crisis thats what i say anyways don't change unless you want 2 x

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Stephen Weyant

hello susan!

almost there! missing that "happily" part!

im so very glad to read your work!

hope youre warm this day!

take care!

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks Stephen I'm fine sorry to hear that wishing you happier times you are kind all the best susan x

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BLOSSOM

GIRL POWER!!!  Susan, I am not good at the short stuff but you have a great talent for these and this particular Haiku is one to be noted.  Much said and much respect!  A big vote from me Susan:)

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Susan O'Reilly

ah what a lovely comment rachel never thought I was good  at the haiku doing more of them lately because wee bit uninspired glad u enjoyed cheers x

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks paul hope your well and that you liked this one cheers x

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Jai Masters

​provoking short piece, Jai

thinks you have a fine message 

Nice write Susan!

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Ron Chapman

Fly high with no worries. Good haiku 

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