Poem -
Happy Never After
Sometimes I think I should be in a land far away
Another time, Another place, I can be myself again
My whole life yearning for something different, something new
I don't long for what's expected, something borrowed something blue
I just can't fit the mould of our society
All I've wanted is to find what sets me free.
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Hi Billy, I think those with a creative mind always want more from society....Its the only way anything is done and changed
Welcome to Cosmofunnel
Lorna :)
Thanks heaps Lorna :)
An intriguing piece...a veritable six-line psychomachia which rewards several readings.
The search for freedom must begin within; it lies in the encounter, the comprehension and acceptance of yourself...for who you are. It's a lifelong endeavour. And writing is a pretty good way of working your way through it.
Welcome to Cosmofunnel.
J ;)
Thanks Jason, really appreciate the feedback mate. Very new to this :)
You will find peace love and laughter
The rest is comfort, real freedom comes from escaping the material world
Welcome to cosmofunnel :)
Thanks Deano :)
Hey BILLY!!..... love the honest, self-aware, track of this..... seems to me you've stumbled upon one of the rungs on the ladder that will help you on your search to find "what sets you free!"....... WELCOME to COSMO brother poet!!...... you're in the right place......ALL STARS!!...... great choice for a début piece!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀
Thanks Tony really appreciate the feedback :)