Poem - 15 July 2021, 09:28

Heart

A change of heart; to the Atoning One,
Only when broken; does it attract The Son!
Then He can enter; and begin to mend it well,
So it can be buoyant; start floating up from hell!

Have you been broken; and had a change of heart?
I know it's hard to die; then just stand and start!
Sometimes we move fast enough to hit a wall!
Sometimes it's different; and takes no speed at all.

Maybe just needing, wanting peace unfurled,
Or a desire of simply; changing the world!!
However you get there; it will take passion!
Something to work with; The Savior can fashion!

Create a lasting legacy, somewhere to start.
Follow The Master, and give Him your heart!

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Jim "The Lad" ....15 July 2021, 10:24

thank you Hj my Friend!

Hj15 July 2021, 10:57

Was brilliant and you’re so welcome ☺️

Kiesha Taylor26 July 2021, 07:20

Mr. Lad, I really enjoyed your beautiful, heart felt, poem entitled heart.

Jim "The Lad" ....26 July 2021, 16:59

Jim is fine! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem Kiesha! thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Jill Tait15 July 2021, 10:44

Abfab as always my Jim the lad 🌹❤️🌹

Jim "The Lad" ....15 July 2021, 10:47

thank you Jill my friend!

Jim "The Lad" ....15 July 2021, 15:05

thank you Shelley-anne my friend!

Jim "The Lad" ....15 July 2021, 18:37

thank you JP!

Liliana of the ...15 July 2021, 21:04

Great write.

Jim "The Lad" ....15 July 2021, 23:58

thank you so much Liliana!

Marion16 July 2021, 07:58

Stunning 🌹🌹🌹

Jim "The Lad" ....16 July 2021, 09:33

humbled Marion! thank you!

Jim "The Lad" ....16 July 2021, 09:34

thank you Greg!

Jim "The Lad" ....16 July 2021, 16:21

thanks for the support Baker Street!

Jim "The Lad" ....17 July 2021, 14:10

thank you Baker Street, never saw that, but cool comparison! thanks for the support!

John Loopstra18 July 2021, 06:51

Though I find it hard to believe in The Lord (okay, I wad brought up in a matriarchal system - not Jewish, though) it is how I feel about things, always burning candles at shrines for the Holy Lady. Thank you🙏🪔

Jim "The Lad" ....19 July 2021, 11:15

thanks John!

Shaun Cronick04 August 2021, 13:26

Jim your well written poem and its treasured message resonates with me for my late mother taught me at a young age when writing, always follow your heart.
Her wise words never forgotten to this day.
And her words I now gladly see mirrored in your powerful and unique poem of a higher power and the message remains uniform and pure.
Amen Jim and thank you for writing something lasting and with words of heartfelt wisdom.

Jim "The Lad" ....04 August 2021, 16:33

means a lot from you my friend! I think our mothers thought much alike!

Liliana of the ...04 August 2021, 23:44

Dearest Jim.
If you are a man of influence as I suspect.
Please help me win.

Jim "The Lad" ....05 August 2021, 15:53

thank you Liliana my friend! how can I help!