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Heartache

Heartache

You were supposed to be there for me
You were supposed to see me through
The good times and the bad
You were supposed to be there to see me grow
To see me become the woman grandma said I would
You were supposed to be proud of me
Like a father is of their child
And I-
I wanted you there
With false hope I went with you
I followed you down a wayward path
For whatever good that did me
I thought I could believe in you
Now I know you never cared about me
I was just a tool in your plan for revenge
You never wanted me
You wanted to cause pain to my mother
You’re no just man
You’re just a fraud
And no father of mine
Save your lies
Keep your excuses
I want none of it
And I don’t want anymore
HEARTACHE

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Tony Taylor

Dear poet sister!!......a VERY tightly woven poetic point of view......rhythmically and timing-wise!!....... your ability to wield words is most elegant!!...... Sorry to hear of your predicament.......I pray these words you have written helped in some small way to help you move forward...... the ability express oneself poetically........ is rare......... and not to be taken lightly....... but most people are ignorant to the world of poetry beyond greeting cards....... smiles........ anyway!......' Heartache sucks!!'........ and you haveΒ done a beautiful job here.....a truly powerfully emotional write.......ALL Stars!!... well done......LOVE and ROCKETS!.......T xo
Ps.......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......T xo

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LittleGift

Welcome to Cosmofunnel, such a sad read, written so very well. Keep writingΒ 
Hugs x

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Rachel Kavanagh

Wow this was so relatable. I could feel your emotions and feelings while reading this poem, Β well written. I'm sorry about your dad, I personally Β dislike my own father too.Β 
-Rachel xxΒ 

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Yiyan Han

You Got Talent! And keep writing.

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