Heartless Winter
I can feel your winter,
Spreading to me.
Why are you always so cold,
Especially to me.
I know you're hurting
Deep inside of you.
But, this pain you're spreading
Causes me to hide from you.
The real you,
Is cracking through.
And it seems life grows
Depressing with and without you.
My heart beats faster
Every day.
When you tell me you hate me,
I want to take my life away.
Your pills and drugs
Are taking its toll.
And each day you take them,
You're beginning to fall.
I don't think I'll catch you,
This time yet.
Because you are freaking me out,
And I'm starting to fret.
I feel your winter,
Spreading to me.
Why are you always so cold,
Especially to me?
I tried to love you,
Each time again.
But it seems that you take me
For granted again and again.
My skin feels cold,
And my heart is ice.
I guess for loving you,
I've paid the ultimate price.
Yet, I cannot stand
Being without you.
There's only one thing to do.
Im gone.
Oh,
I can feel your warmth
Rising again.
This time now,
I won't be around.
Because with you,
Everything's on repeat.
I'm starting to hate this,
You're growing cold feet.
Yet I still feel your winter
Spreading to me.
Why are you always so cold,
Especially to me?
I learnt to love you,
Everyday.
But now I'm gone.
I've Gone away.
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The one's we love often hurt us the most. It was very well written good read.
Yes, that is true. It is more painful if someone we know hurts us, rather than someone who means very little. Thanks for the feedback :) Grateful for it.
As always jade great to read your content
Thanks Lee :)
Wow Awesome piece Of Writing. Poet's and Poetess Like us Don't Come About Everyday. Searching The World You Couldn't An Amazing Gifting Like Yours. Keep it Up!! No Matter What Anyone Else Might Think.. Your Exceptional!! Could Really Feel The Cold hearted Feelings Run Deep In this poem!!
Thanks John :)
I appreciate it. My fam didn't exactly approve of me being on this website (with randoms and all) so I have this account now, Just to check up on things.
Thanks again for your nice feed back :)
Omg, I can log back in again.
Damn, life is too complicated, lol.
Beautiful. Somehow you've painted a world full of melancholy clouds and dark blue ice, but it somewhat feels eerily calm and steady... maybe too calm. Love the use of winter as a metaphor for the person's feelings towards themselves and to others. On the other hand, winter is a season, so if she stuck around maybe the warmth of summer could have brightened up their relationship?
Keep up the amazing writing, Jade. :^)
Lol, is that you secrets intruder? "Camel" smh. I could be wrong, though. Although, I, pretty sure I'm correct in knowing your identity (sorry, no one is as cool as Super Man is at hiding who they are, excluding Bat Man and Frodo when he wears the ring)
Well, thank you for your comment. I never realised how deep you thought about things. And too true. Maybe things could have warmed up, but the female could have been fed up with the repetitive cycle of her love's mood swings. Therefore, deciding to stop as the fort was too much.
Ty ty ty. I will write the next time I have a word document open that does not involve my obsession with a guy in my drama class.
anywho, have a good night :)
"Fort" omg typo. I had meant "effort".
*Mentally kicks myself for not clicking "e" and the first "f"*