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HEAVEN PLEASE...LET ME IN

HEAVEN PLEASE...LET ME IN

If you were on the way to Heaven and you were told you couldn't get in...

Surely, it must be a mistake...

God explains you didn't heed the warnings of my words...

You rejected the help that was given...

You turned your back on my Law and you didn't ask me if I approved how you lived your life...

You reply My God, I repented of my sins...

What did you do after that?

I made a mistake and again, I repented...

God you say to forgive seven times seventy...

The Angels Harps begin to play...

Beautiful voices and Beautiful faces all around you...

Loved ones you couldn't wait to see and to love all your living days, after they passed away...

Arms reaching, and people smiling...

You can smell the beautiful scent as it seeps through...

God asks...

Do you remember how they died?

You reply Yes or No...

They sinned God, after they repented...

God replies...

The Difference between they and you...

The answer is clear...

Now, why should I let you in?

Because, I love you?

I repented...

I repented...

Oh God!

I repented...

Heaven, Please...

Let me in...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

I don't believe in not trying to be the best we can be...

Sure, it"s fine to sin, because we're forgiven?

I think we can be more than mediocre and like many other people...

The chance is ours alone...

Only God knows who He will accept in His Kingdom...

There's a place for 144,000 Right?

Only thing I can say is...

May, Heaven be our Home?

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Love n Hugs

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Lauren...

Me too, my friend...

I would just really like to stay there...

He has the final say, though...

Not us...

Thank you for your sweet comment and support! ?

Love & Hugs

sparrowsong

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linda wright

the scripture that comes to mind is i stand at the door and knock linda

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lodigiana

Hi hun,   Heaven can wait...until He decides.. but we have a hand in that also and part of our destiny is to live our lives the best way we can..sure we will stumble and fall but we know that redemtion is for everyone so we can get right back up again and try not to fall but if we do then we know all is not lost..Lovely  piece of work and one to really reflect on! Love it hun xxx
Lodigiana

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sparrowsong

Hello Linda...

​​​​​Knock and He will answer?

Someone knocks on our Door, we usually answer?

Do we let everyone in?

Even Businesses have a Maximum Capacity?

Heaven's Kingdom is God's Business?

Do we even know what Heaven's population is?

Not everyone is interested in Heaven, that does help with availability...

To me Heaven, is not to be a thing to do this life by the skin of my teeth...

We may be surprised when we get there and People we thought we'd see isn't at the Party...
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Thank you for your comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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lodigiana

*redemption*   sorry writing without my glasses on!! always dangerous xx

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

People like to read Scriptures of things that sound good, God's Promises, God's Rewards but, when we get to a part that we don't like we go back to the Sweet Stuff?

We stumble and fall, but we try, and we know the know...

What messages are we sending to the World?

​​​​​​The difference of the Messages we send to God?

God isn't confused...

But, His People are...

Thank you for your comment and support my friend!

Glad you enjoyed!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

That makes two of us, and then my device decides it wants to say something too...

?

It's just not right...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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