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Heaven In Reverse

Heaven In Reverse

Heaven In Reverse

Imagine with me, Abbie C.
That there were worlds, of which three,
Similar to each other, but very different entirely.
A Heaven, A Hell, and us in between.
As with each world, stands you,
Living lives unknown to each, yet,
Connected, a soul as one.
The world we live, Free Will our guide,
Good versus evil, laws we abide.
A place no safer to be, Heaven its name(Ying)
Nothing but good, no fear at all.
No Free Will, no choice to be made,
All Love, Wisdom, Strength born unto you,
Never knowing a bad thought,no laws to abide,
All things done to, and unto you are with love.
Heaven(Ying) this world you(Abbie II) calls home.
Opposite Heaven(Ying) is the world Hell(Yang)
Your(Abbie III) life there knows no peace, evil runs rampant.
Born unto pain, manipulation, and addictions,
Fear is normalcy, happiness unheard of, irrelevant.
As connected in life, also in death, a rotation occurs.
Your Heaven(Ying) is another mans Hell(Yang)
Abbie C. will descend to heaven, finally peace,
A world of Free Will, every happy thought,
Twice as many dark,hard to walk the line.
Heaven, evil, a word never heard,hard to comprehend,
Bound just, by good deeds, and happy memories.
Restrained from free thoughts of depression, 
Of heartbreak, of remorse, of guilt,
Free actions of envy, of betrayal, of pain, of greed.
Constrained by ones configuration,
Through his eyes of happiness he sees.
No need to worry your path is laid out, chosen, freedom aside.
Abbie II having no freedom from good, ascends to Hell.
Unknown this behavior to her,
Not knowing what to think, fully awakened.
No sign of love, of happiness, of kindness,
No actions of joy, of smiling, of admiration,
She becomes alive, starts to love her new surroundings,
Behest to her, the evil which is on display,
Evil becomes her, evil awakens her, Evil is her.
Innocent she is to this ascended place,
Configured a life, opposite to this, who to believe.
Wrong is a word foreign to her, no meaning at all, is she to blame.
Abbie III emerges to earth, evil as can be,
Innocence of a girl of 13. With evil as her normality,
Free Will in this world, such abnormality,
Disconnected from love, from happiness, from solitude,
She's unable to walk the line as laws are stated,
A life she had here, she chose to take, Heaven this place.
With this rotation ever so present,
Life is just the start, death is only the beginning.
What separates these worlds and connects just the same,
A simple ability, Free Will.
Of these three, girls I speak
Right and wrong, which is heaven to thee.
Truth is, we are dead, and just living
Heaven in Reverse.

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sparrowsong

Amazing...I love it. Thank you for the beautiful write.

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Jerred Coleman

Sparrowsong,

Thanks for the compliment,I am glad you like it.  Tried doing a little darker side today, and a more speculative critical thinking one.  Your to kind, thanks you again.

Jerred

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Valerie Lynn

Wow what an interesting concept! Excellent dark write! These are my favorite lines:

Truth is, we are dead, and just living
Heaven in Reverse.

5*s

Val ♥️

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Jerred Coleman

Thanks Val, figured you would like this one.  My mind works in mysterious ways, sometimes I wonder.  Thanks for reading and the support, your compliments are always welcomed thank you.

Jerred

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Jerred Coleman

Your are to kind thank you Dorothy, I appreciate it.

Jerred

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Excellent write, my applause, my love, my vote

Born unto pain, manipulation, and addictions,
Fear is normalcy, happiness unheard of, irrelevant.
As connected in life, also in death, a rotation occurs.
Your Heaven(Ying) is another mans Hell(Yang)
Abbie C. will descend to heaven, finally peace,
A world of Free Will, every happy thought,
Twice as many dark,hard to walk the line.

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Jerred Coleman

Thanks for the kind words Williamsji Maveli.  Went into a dark direction with this, one but am happy the way it turned out.  Thanks for the love and support, I will try and keep them coming for you.

J

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