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heaviest of all.

In times of sadness,
you think there's nothing worse,
There is something worse,
Than the very questionings,
The are you okays,
Its not having anyone there at all to ask you,
Console,
Comfort you,
They always seem Happy,
to be around to watch you rise,
But nobody to catch your fall,
Wipe the tears from your eyes,
making your loss the heaviest of all.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

nardine sanderson,

In times of sadness, none will join with you to cry, But when you laugh many will gather around, this is the world, Good verse, My love, My applause, My vote

They always seem Happy,
to be around to watch you rise,
But nobody to catch your fall,
Wipe the tears from your eyes,
making your loss the heaviest of all.

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Nardine Sanderson

Very true it is of life, such times situations, i am indeed blessed now days with many hands to catch my fall, but sadly some have non,.
much love to you Cherie, and thank you sir williamsji for your thoughts also, much love nardine xx

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Tony Taylor

Hi Nardine,  you nailed this one......its a good subject too....there are so many times in life when all a person needs is just a little reassurance that there will be someone "there" to catch them if they fall.   ...strong write my friend..........well done......tony  xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you tony your a sweetheart, i feel for the ones alone and suffering, at times I've felt more than alone in times of sadness, often people push others away to deal with their sorrow there own way, ending up actually alone in despair, in lucky to have a great support unit of family and friends, but it makes me wonder about others in need, much love to you dearest Tony, nardine xoxo

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Ravindra Kumar

Having masked with the skin of true friends He is always standing before us to wipe the tears..."Wipe the tears from your eyes, making your less the heaviest of all."..sincerity in views and thoughts console every heart suffering discomfort...good...I like....with regards,...xx Ravindra Kumar xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you sweet ravindra Kumar xx much love to you sweetheart xx Nardine xx

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