Hahaha... Oh brilliant! Another great memorable poem!Β I love it! And I really like the way you used the lines
Pawning reindeer was a pain
'Cause even brokers showed disdain
And then to put in these lines later towardsΒ the end
Sympathy t'was easy to pawn
I thought that was clever and works so well. The rhyme scheme you used was good too. aa b cc b. I love this poem! Another one pinned πππVery well doneΒ x
Funny stuff! loved it! In mine the girls and boys don't get their toys either, but it wasn't from a mickey!!! You have been naughty! all smiles..................Jim
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Hahaha... Oh brilliant! Another great memorable poem!Β I love it! And I really like the way you used the lines
And then to put in these lines later towardsΒ the end
I thought that was clever and works so well. The rhyme scheme you used was good too. aa b cc b. I love this poem! Another one pinned πππVery well doneΒ x
Thank you Tina. Iβm gonna work on more comedy Christmas time should be light and humorous.Β
I look forward to it!Β You are a fabulous writer so I know it will be well worth the read x
thank you
Dont know why but this stood out to me heaps
hilariously funny. Enjoyed it a lot. Kind regards. Max
thank you
Brilliant, I love this, laughter is what we need this year, it's been tough, and of course, a poem delivered exquisitely, as always.Β
X
thank you
Funny stuff! loved it! In mine the girls and boys don't get their toys either, but it wasn't from a mickey!!! You have been naughty! all smiles..................Jim
lol Thank you Jim