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“HELLO IT’’S JILL!!!”

“HELLO IT’’S JILL!!!”

I scrambled up the rugged rock face of a coarse craggy cliff
A rolling river rambled down below me I was so scared stiff
But with courage and steed I surged to the top, I was very brave indeed and didn’t dare look at the deep drop

Wow I had only gone and done it and conquered my inner fears 
I imagined myself just like one of those marvellous mountaineers
Such a sensational buzz when I reached the summit as I threw a stone and I watched it plummit

I shouted “HELLO” to the ground below as it reverberated around
“HELLOHELlohello” in a triple echo
I yelled “HELLO” again and then “HELLO IT’S JILL!!!”
“HELLOHELlohelloJilllllll” sounded so brill

What a long, hard slog, I had nerves of steel but Oh my God it was worth it for the way it made me feel
My panoramic views made it all worthwhile at the green grassy hues of the Emerald Isle
 

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Marion

Lol....did anyone ANSWER???? ??

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Jill Tait

Pml ay I answered mesell three times ???

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Jill Tait

Not top of a mountain but went up up up today from a very steep ravine to overlook a town it was so beautiful mind u climb was so hard I coughed alot lol but worth it ontop x I will send you pic on msger xx

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