Poem - 27 October 2021, 01:00

HELLO TO THE MOON

Greg Etsell

I lay here in bed,

Looking at the moon,

That shines in my window,

I can hear dog and owl,

The owl say shut up dog,

I lay here in bed thinking,

Of song it won't be long,

Before i am sleep,

Hello to the moon,

I lay in my bed,

And the moon is,

Shines on my bed,

I keep thinking of,

A song it won't be,

Long before i am,

Sleep but i got up,

To look out my,

Window and,

Saw how beautiful the moon,

And the stars are,

Hello to the moon,

I lay here in my bed,

Thinking of song,

I hope before,

Long i am sleep,

I will say good night,

To the moon,

So good night,

To you!!!!!.

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Jill Tait27 October 2021, 01:06

Haha at that lovely beautiful tuneful moon nice one Greg ❤️💙❤️

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 01:16

i did get some sleep
i was wake thinking
of this poem i think
i could be song
what do you think
try singing your way
when you have the time

Jill Tait27 October 2021, 01:17

I had another restless night restless legs lol ❤️💕❤️

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 01:18

Restless leg oh dear
I hate that but I had a restless mind

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 01:07

thank you so much
Jill!!!!!!

Gwendoline27 October 2021, 01:08

Wow Greg this is a special write indeed. I just loved the slumber sensation you created. This is because of your repeated lines that give the reader a sense of drifting off to sleep. The moon reads like a lullaby. Just majestic and beautiful Greg, truly...this poem shines my friend
Gwen xx

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 01:11

Thank you so much
Gwendoline I thought of it all night
funny I did get some sleep

Tony Taylor27 October 2021, 09:42

Hey GREG!!......what I like about this is the soft light that your words create....the repeated image of the moon as it shines on your bed....as it shines through your window.....I kept seeing BLUE LIGHT as it shone in your room and it creates such a magical scene in my minds eye!!......ALL STARS!!.....I VERY much enjoyed this dear poet brother!!........well penned.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 09:55

Thank you Tony I didn’t see any blue light but one night it was orange the moon

Jim "The Lad" ....27 October 2021, 12:05

cool write Greg!.........................................................................................Jim

Greg Etsell27 October 2021, 12:06

Thank you Jim the lad

Being Me28 October 2021, 09:17

I always find the moon comforting for just being there...it is a constant in days of shifting sands. This is a lovely poem, Greg, you managed to create lovely imagery here x

Greg Etsell28 October 2021, 09:23

Thank you Tina too many nights of laying in bed watching the moon

Shaun Cronick29 October 2021, 13:33

It's always good to read a good poem about the moon and what it can offer.
What's on display and you have displayed here not just the moon but that elusive sleep we need sometimes and always seem to be looking up at it sooner or later and always in awe.
A shining poem with superb imagery to take in and one that literally shines.
And shine on Greg and keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Stay well and stay healthy my friend

Greg Etsell29 October 2021, 13:41

Thank you Shaun
Bless you my friend

Shaun Cronick29 October 2021, 14:37

Greg, always a pleasure sir.🙂

Greg Etsell29 October 2021, 14:45

Thank you sir