Poem - 01 August 2014, 19:09

" Her EYES "...

I think of her
And I can't seem to recall
A thing
I dream of her
A translucent being
Her eyes
The only thing
I seem to gravitate
toward
Is her
In everything
Everywhere I go
It's her
glittering image
I feel
Everywhere around
it's her eyes
That draw
Me near to her
All day
In everyway
I'm lost without them
Her eyes
Her light
Her smile
All I dream about
Is life
without
Her eyes....

Tony Taylor (Chicago)

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...01 August 2014, 19:35

Dear Brother Tony Taylor,

Excellent write, I love it, My applause, My love, My vote

In everything
Everywhere I go
It's her
glittering image
I feel
Everywhere around
it's her eyes
That draw
Me near to her
All day
In everyway
I'm lost without them
Her eyes
Her light
Her smile
All I dream about
Is life
without
Her eyes....

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Tony Taylor02 August 2014, 19:06

Hey Mr. Maveli. I love it that you liked this.......I thought it might be little too mushy........but I'm glad to know it's appreciated........thanks again my brother.........tony xx

Georgina Richardson04 August 2014, 01:28

That is a lovely wistful romantic and poignant piece T` well done honey. She`s a lucky girl who catches your heart!! Beautifully written and I would like to see you do a series of romantic ones to show us your muscles!! Love G xx